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Just Two Weeks Left To Go - But Where

There’s just two weeks left to go Before either Santa or your own chosen one steal’s the show As for me I just hope it snows But not enough to freeze my toes I am not a religious man But I do like our wonderland Planet earth is my place to be But where we are all from doesn’t bother me As I can also see That the time and place that matters most Is where we then see our own ghosts As mentioned there is just two weeks left to go So please whatever bothers just don't let it show Because all of us can live and be In our one world of humanity Upstairs somewhere we were told Is where we all eventually go But no one seems to really know - WHERE - DAMO Merry and Happy or whatever you believe in.. Two words though that I am feeling..

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Noel Flater

Date: 1/9/2019 1:56:00 PM

I like caps - WHERE - set off - highlights the mystery

Damian Keady
Date: 1/9/2019 4:10:00 PM

Thanks Noel for your look at my verse and your positive comment.. I think I am a bit of a Maverick when I put pen to paper.. But in my defence I have only just taken up writing recently.. So I just write what I feel or in my head, without following any formula - so to be appreciated for my foil in my poetry means a lot when someone else gets it. All the best DAMO