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Just the Sound of Her Fallen Tears

Another Soul is in a Storm. A choice was made for her unborn. The Haunting Nightmares linger on. Relentless blame to overcome. There is no Birthday not Today. Or ever be to celebrate. No Gift wrap Presents to enjoy. No Birthday Cake, Candles, or Toys. Her heart is Crying out for Him. "Forgive Me Son for I have Sinned." An Unheard Voice She'll never hear. Just the sound of her fallen Tears. Michael Tor

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/2/2023 4:07:00 PM

Fantastic poetry my good friend. A fav, a gleaming jewel too. God bless...

Michael Tor
Date: 7/3/2023 9:31:00 PM

Thank you Robert God bless you my friend...

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/12/2023 12:16:00 PM

very touching and belated congratulations on you potd Michael

Michael Tor
Date: 6/14/2023 11:43:00 PM

Thank you Nancy...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/16/2023 1:04:00 PM

So sad, so true so succinct - 'An unheard Voice she'll never hear, Just the sound of her fallen tears'. Well penned Michael, superb poetry hugs, blessings Jennifer.

Michael Tor
Date: 5/26/2023 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer sorry for late response been away.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/4/2023 3:22:00 AM

Good Morning michael. Please allow me to let your quiet and yes emotional entry and words stand. There is nothing I could add. I turned to this entry at random do to its title. Your message is clear coherent and yes well thought out in a poetic way. For anyone in this situation I pray. May today find you well. It was an honor turning to your page this morning. Enjoy the weekend and poetrysoup too. (smile) Congratulations on your entry being POTD

Michael Tor
Date: 5/26/2023 2:57:00 PM

Thank you Lisa, sorry for late response I have been away. God bless you.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/25/2023 12:53:00 AM

WOW! This is incredible!!! So heartwrenching... heart breaking - Your words move mountains and shorelines. Awake the spirit and silence the darkness. LOVE THIS. a fave. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Michael Tor
Date: 3/1/2023 9:43:00 PM

Thank you Gina for your much love words. God bless you Dear...

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2023 9:25:00 PM

I'm ever so late on this trying to catch up, Michael, but sometimes i find it an advantage, the poem so sad yet beautiful, but the message so true,,But as i read this, i'm thinking of those poor children in Turkey and Syria trapped in the rubble and devastation.

Michael Tor
Date: 2/10/2023 10:44:00 PM

Yes Harry those poor children in that awful earthquake. Just take your time Harry. No rush my friend. Your comments I can wait for. God bless you...

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 2/8/2023 11:00:00 PM

beautiful loving poem shared; it's poetical compassionate expression; just love it; congrats for being selected the poem as POD

Michael Tor
Date: 2/10/2023 10:43:00 PM

Thank you Mahtab your words mean a lot my friend.

Robert Gorelick

Date: 2/6/2023 1:33:00 PM

Belated congratulations Michael on your POTD! Compassionate thoughts, Michael. But not all children are blessed with love. I've recently been reading about small children tortured and killed by parents. They surely would have preferred not to have been born!

Michael Tor
Date: 2/6/2023 7:25:00 PM

What a tragedy Robert given life and then abused during their life by their own parents. So much darkness in this world for these children. What have we become as a society. I am glad I had decent parents they weren't perfect but they loved us and protected us. Thank you Robert for stopping by and as always an insightful comment...

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/5/2023 5:31:00 AM

The depth of feeling that you put into your poetry is astounding. What a moving and poetic way to describe the anguish you feel. So tragic, Michael; one can almost sense the anguish that those poor women went through. Congratulations on having your poem selected as the "poem of the day"...

Michael Tor
Date: 2/5/2023 4:53:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I am touched by your comment. Coming from a man that is a gifted writer who expresses himself at the highest level of thought and sensitivity. Thank you my friend for your support and God bless you for the good you do for the Soup and its members...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2023 5:13:00 AM

I can't imagine what this woman is going through the guilt would eat a person up. I had a cousin who got pregnant and wasn't married and decided to give that child up for adoption and it just about killed her. It is one thing to give one up for a better life or to have a miscarriage and another to have an abortion. Thanks for sharing this point of view in this work. Our son is now in PT for his condition. We hope that the PT will make a difference in his semi-paralysis in his lower body. Sara

Michael Tor
Date: 2/5/2023 4:45:00 PM

I hope so Sara. That it makes a difference for your son. You have been through so much. I hope your doing well my Dear. I haven't been commenting like I would like to. I have been extreemly busy. Miss your poetry...

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/4/2023 12:17:00 AM

Such a hard realty Michael,. Only those woh Carry this weight can really have any idea.' I reccomend giving it to Jesus, for any such All blessings in Him brother'

Michael Tor
Date: 2/4/2023 3:06:00 PM

Hi Joe thank you Joe for your comment. I will mail you. Right away...

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/4/2023 12:18:00 AM

Oh btw I cant find you on a search.' Can you mail me?

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/3/2023 11:18:00 PM

Michael this is a fantastic write - a topic of heated conversations and debates, hope her reasons her decision and finally her choice is appropriate and carefully spoken through with a partner or parents and finally the choice is legitimate. Otherwise she will unhappy, sad and blame herself forever. Congratulations my friend for a very poignant write which was honored and chosen for POTD. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Michael Tor
Date: 2/4/2023 3:09:00 PM

Hi Jennifer thank you so much for your much appreciated comment. for your much appreciated comment. Hope you are well. Hugs back...

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/3/2023 1:00:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD Michael! Great write. Take care Michael ~Anaya

Joe Maverick
Date: 2/4/2023 12:10:00 AM

I see no judgement in this piece Unlesss we see judgement in Recounting the the experience Others have relayed who regret Some may not.' These are the facts only.'

Michael Tor
Date: 2/3/2023 3:20:00 PM

Thank you Anaya for your comment. I hope you are well and writing.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 2/2/2023 10:57:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD, Dear Michael. This is a highly debatable issue - hard to judge unless having the same experience. Powerful poem, Michael. Best wishes ~ Mala

Michael Tor
Date: 2/3/2023 12:29:00 PM

Thank you Mala, your comment is well appreciated.... God bless you...

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/2/2023 6:45:00 PM

(Every life is precious) Remembering that: Adoption is always an option. Your thoughts touch my heart deeply. Choices have consequences. Good or bad. Congratulations Michael, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Michael Tor
Date: 2/2/2023 7:08:00 PM

Thank you Brandy. Some people believe that killing is the answer. They are lucky to be alive and lucky to have parents that made the right choice in bringing them into existence. These same people would want their life spared by their parents but they believe in killing their unborn. They do not want to give the unborn the same right that was given to them by their parents. I can never understand this train of thought. It borderlines Hypocrisy. Thank you for your kindness Brandy.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 2/2/2023 6:38:00 PM

The poem is excellent but I must comment in support of Unseeking Seeker. As a retired psychotherapist, I have seen the results also of having an unwanted child. Do not judge until you have walked a mlle in my moccasins! Elizabeth

I Am Anaya
Date: 2/4/2023 9:17:00 AM

I support you Elizabeth! Jesus Christ loves you more for your compassionate understanding of what some women have endured.

Michael Tor
Date: 2/2/2023 6:53:00 PM

Righteous judgement we all do, for example if you see a a drunk driver hit and kill a pedestrian. You can judge and think that is wrong, and pass judgement on that drunk driver. Or if you see a murder commited between adults you can judge and say that is wrong. If you are in a trial on jury duty and you convict the perpetrator you have passed judgement and that is ok, but if you judge someone for the way they look that is different, or their ethnicity, that is wrong. I fear more my Gods judgement then walking in your your moccasins for a mile!

Michael Tor
Date: 2/2/2023 6:47:00 PM

Elizabeth please do not worry about my judgement, for I feel for the Mother and the unborn. I am not judging I am stating a fact of how many women go through with termination and suffer the emotional trauma afterwards. As a psychotherapist I am sure that you know about the mother that terminates and later regrets and suffers from emotional trauma, you didn't mention those mothers in your comments as a psychotherapist. If a parent does not want the unborn they can relinquish the unborn to a loving family that would unselfishly love the child. Like you as psychotherapist I have seen the results of the emotional trauma that tens of thousands regrettably feel. There is such a thing... I like you in support of the Seeker, am in support of the twenty-one supporting comments for the sanctity of life...

Michael Tor

Date: 2/2/2023 6:15:00 PM

Thank you Poetry Soup Team your efforts are always appreciated. Thank you again...

Fin Chuuk

Date: 2/2/2023 3:39:00 PM

A heartbreaking poem. And powerful too! Congratulations on POTD.

Michael Tor
Date: 2/2/2023 4:08:00 PM

Thank you Fin. I appreciate your thoughts and Congrats. Have a nice day...

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 2/2/2023 3:12:00 PM

Such a heartbreaking poem, Michael. Congratulatiions. on POTD

Michael Tor
Date: 2/2/2023 4:11:00 PM

Thank you Suzanne. It is heartbreaking. We live in a world where there is good and there is sometimes regrets that at the time a wrong choice is made and later realized with haunting consequences...

Arlo Parker

Date: 2/2/2023 12:48:00 PM

POTD congratz on a piece resounding with poignant tears for a precious life not exercised...wonderful, evocative poetry on display. :o\

Michael Tor
Date: 2/2/2023 4:16:00 PM

Thank you Arlo for your insightful comment my friend...

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/2/2023 12:03:00 PM

So sad Micheal, one can feel the pain the poor women suffered. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle

Michael Tor
Date: 2/2/2023 4:18:00 PM

Thank you Belle. Your kind words mean a lot.

Jim Slaughter

Date: 2/2/2023 11:49:00 AM

I can only imagine what's behind this heart-wrenching piece, Michael. Congrats on POTD seems a bit "lame"...but congrats, anyway.

Michael Tor
Date: 2/2/2023 4:42:00 PM

Thank you Jim for your insightful comment... Thanks for stopping by...

Lin Lane

Date: 2/2/2023 10:51:00 AM

The depth of sorrow and emotional pain are sometimes never overcome by making such a decision. I respect the recognition you're receiving with your POTD, Michael.

Michael Tor
Date: 2/2/2023 4:44:00 PM

Hi Lin. I agree so much with your insightful comment Dear...

Bill Baker

Date: 2/2/2023 9:52:00 AM

Splended reminder of the ramifications of the choices we made. Well written with truth and empathy. Congratulations on your POTD, Michael! Enjoy your day of recognition my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Michael Tor
Date: 2/2/2023 4:54:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend. Your words reflect how I feel Bill. Thanks for stopping by my friend...

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/2/2023 9:22:00 AM

Michael, congratulations on your POTD with this poem of agonizing shame and the desire to claw back an irreversible decision. I so agree with Paula about adoption. Your words are written with compassion and mercy. They are beautifully crafted into a poem of immense impact! Sending you blessings my friend!

Michael Tor
Date: 2/2/2023 4:53:00 PM

Thank you Sam your comment are my thoughts exact. Your comments are always ones I always look forward to reading Sam. Thank you my friend...