Just Me and You

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Inspired by Chris Green's Monoku, 'Poetic Kiss,' posted Oct. 23, 2019...

Just me and you'll... never say adieu ~ in our monoku built for two

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Chris Green

Date: 10/24/2019 6:52:00 AM

Beautifully crafted my friend. Anything built for two is beautiful in my eyes. Thank you for the mention but it is I who always find your pieces inspiring.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/24/2019 1:01:00 PM

Chris, you've taken the words right out of my pen, for I am truly so inspired by your poetry! You are just too kind to me. ~ Here in Chic-awe-go

Hello There

Date: 10/23/2019 11:41:00 PM

Adorable ~ an inspiration of its own :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/24/2019 12:45:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely observation, HT. Much appreciated. ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/23/2019 9:08:00 PM

"a MONOku built for two"... too cute, Gershon. LOL

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2019 10:35:00 PM

Want to come for a swing with me in my hammock, my fair lady? LOL. (I'll return you to your hubby. Never fear) ~ No swinger, I :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/23/2019 6:38:00 PM

oh how sweet is this GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2019 7:41:00 PM

Thanks for the sweet comment, Jan! :-) gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/23/2019 6:34:00 PM

beautiful monoku Gershon....I can see his poem inspiring this for sure... love it :) hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/23/2019 7:41:00 PM

Pretty transparent that inspiration, wasn't it?! Thanks, Sandra. :)