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Just Let It Go. . .

Let go I'll bring you closer Right now I'll hold on tightly Let go We're going no where Somewhere And aren't over Harder times like these! Growing up on the streets! Harder times like these! I'll put you back on your feet! And I fall to the ground with my teardrops And I get lost everytime my heart stops This love this is burning me away

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Laurie Ginn

Date: 12/4/2008 6:23:00 PM

You have talent. I think you are a developing young poet that will far out do anything I will ever write. You write because you need to I write for fun.

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/4/2008 6:18:00 PM

this piece is so so. john

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/4/2008 12:53:00 PM

I can see where you're going with this like derrick is saying, this needs some more heart more depth, I know it's in there. i liked it either way. ~Michaela~

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/4/2008 11:08:00 AM

i dropped you a comment earlier on this one and really dont see it any more, the key to great poetry is not trying to make it good and only writing off the top of your head, this poem is really expresses your love for this person, make sure its real.