Just Kiss Me Quick

So many crumpled letters, and I still can’t exactly say How my heart crawls for you as toes knot cold feet, Oh Sammy, will you ever guess what stuns my joy When we lie on dim parks till all fireflies trill the night? But we’re kind of best friends giggling in the sand Flowers sent with buddy notes, the tummy spins As hands freeze when you ruffle my wind-blown hair; How I wish my words can fly, “come, kiss me quick!” The moonlight whispers our names with burnt desire Igniting wishful dreams when eyes meet skin to skin So kiss me quick, baby, our theme song plays along, Yearning to unleash sweet flame in a dance of bliss; And here I am, right under your hot, hot breath With citrusy scent that may give you some hint, Hoping you'd taste my lips in a rush of love's ride Or my mouth might kiss you quick, just out of the blue! *kiss me quick The KISSING GAME CONTEST of PD By nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/3/2012 8:58:00 AM
I missed the contest myself when it was about but still wrote one called the kiss of life nice write loved it xx davidscott
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Date: 8/29/2012 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Kissing Game" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2012 5:01:00 PM
Wonderful write Nette....getting up the courage to just kiss someone you desire is maddening. Excellent write! Hugs
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Date: 8/24/2012 6:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette!!! Always,, hugs :)
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Date: 8/24/2012 1:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win nette xx
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Date: 8/23/2012 10:48:00 PM
Very descriptive, and delightful to read. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/23/2012 9:02:00 PM
Nette,,, nice nice...,, Congratulations with your wonderful and awesome entry. Thank you for supporting my kissing game contest. Good night~ :* PD
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Date: 8/17/2012 7:49:00 PM
Good one Nette.....romantic write.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 8/16/2012 9:36:00 PM
LOVE this one, Nette. Your kissing poem is outstanding. One of my favorites in the contest!!
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Date: 8/15/2012 3:18:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest with this descriptive and expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/15/2012 10:19:00 AM
This is such a sweet little write! I do love the quick nature in which you desire to kiss your friend! Such kind hearts the two of you carry, desiring to hold each other close, but desiring in one way to just be friends! What a fabulous tale of two hearts that are really in love but torn in the seeming possibility of losing a friendship in the mix! Glorious piece my friend, I truly love it, the fine nature to just kiss me quick! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/15/2012 8:59:00 AM
this was wonderful.. How sweet it was.. I loved it and good luck in the contest :) cory
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Date: 8/15/2012 7:14:00 AM
passionate poem, nette, a joy to read.
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Date: 8/15/2012 3:54:00 AM
Passionate and hot...romance all around..winning wishes, :) Jag
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Date: 8/15/2012 3:01:00 AM
So sweet Nette....Wish you luck in contest, and hope for a win for you. - Have a nice day. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :) :) <3
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Date: 8/15/2012 2:52:00 AM
Nette that's it you go for it, right on the lips, I like it and good luck..David
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