Barbara Gorelick Poet Quintain (English)

Just Hanging Out

Ok, it seems I made a bit of a mess
It happened when my lady was on the phone
Ok, so I kind of messed up her new dress
I knew it wasn't good when she started to groan
But really now, to hang me up here all alone?


Barbara Gorelick 8/2/11

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Steven Mossburg August 14, 2011 at 5:47 PM Ha! As a pet lover, I could fully appreciate this. Good job.

Jack Horne August 14, 2011 at 5:39 PM LOL, it's time for me to go to bed - and I'm going on a chuckle : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 10, 2011 at 11:02 AM Congrats BG on a super second place win with this fantastic write .. enjoy top billing luv..

Jack Horne August 10, 2011 at 10:15 AM Many congrats, Barbara : )

Debbie Guzzi August 10, 2011 at 10:10 AM Congrad's short & humerous. Light & love

Sara Kendrick August 10, 2011 at 8:02 AM Creative winner..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2011 at 7:54 AM Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "Hangin In There" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage August 10, 2011 at 6:25 AM Really cute, nice write. Congratulations on 2nd place. Lee

Nette Onclaud August 10, 2011 at 5:31 AM i like this, barbara, so melodious!... best congrats! :) huggs

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 10, 2011 at 2:57 AM Congrats on your well deserved win Barbara!!!!!!!!!!

Carolyn Devonshire August 10, 2011 at 12:49 AM LOL So happy to see you ranking high in the contest, dear LNC. Congratulations, My friend. Love, Carolyn

Nancy Jones August 10, 2011 at 12:21 AM awww.. sweet!

Francine Roberts August 10, 2011 at 12:13 AM congrats Barbara on your second place win in the contest, very cute entry

James Foulk August 6, 2011 at 9:12 PM a very creative and well done poem. thank you for commenting on my poem and sorry I took so long to get back to you. I hurt my back and it still hurts to sit very long.

Zzzzz Zzzzz August 5, 2011 at 2:13 PM Ah yes...the kitten contest! A fun write and a good interpretation of what may have happened! Good luck with this! xoxo Robert.

Sidney Beck August 3, 2011 at 10:12 AM cute kitten....cute rhyme....very nice...good luck in the contest

Black Eyed Susan August 2, 2011 at 1:32 PM lol! what a rascally kitten! I almost feel bad for him/her :) good luck in the contest!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 2, 2011 at 11:46 AM Nice approach to the theme of the hanging out, Barbara

Cory Long August 2, 2011 at 9:57 AM good job with this one sounds like a winner. cory

Thvia Shetley August 2, 2011 at 9:42 AM Hi Barbara! Lovely to be back and reading your poetry again. As always, I enjoyed your work!