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Just Hanging Out

Ok, it seems I made a bit of a mess
It happened when my lady was on the phone
Ok, so I kind of messed up her new dress
I knew it wasn't good when she started to groan
But really now, to hang me up here all alone?


Barbara Gorelick 8/2/11

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Steven Mossburg Date: 8/14/2011 5:47:00 PM Ha! As a pet lover, I could fully appreciate this. Good job. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/14/2011 5:39:00 PM LOL, it's time for me to go to bed - and I'm going on a chuckle : ) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/10/2011 11:02:00 AM Congrats BG on a super second place win with this fantastic write .. enjoy top billing luv.. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 8/10/2011 10:15:00 AM Many congrats, Barbara : ) Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/10/2011 10:10:00 AM Congrad's short & humerous. Light & love Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2011 8:02:00 AM Creative winner..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/10/2011 7:54:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "Hangin In There" contest Barbara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 8/10/2011 6:25:00 AM Really cute, nice write. Congratulations on 2nd place. Lee Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/10/2011 5:31:00 AM i like this, barbara, so melodious!... best congrats! :) huggs Login to Reply

Chiquitachiamaka Baity Date: 8/10/2011 2:57:00 AM Congrats on your well deserved win Barbara!!!!!!!!!! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/10/2011 12:49:00 AM LOL So happy to see you ranking high in the contest, dear LNC. Congratulations, My friend. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Nancy Jones Date: 8/10/2011 12:21:00 AM awww.. sweet! Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 8/10/2011 12:13:00 AM congrats Barbara on your second place win in the contest, very cute entry Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 8/6/2011 9:12:00 PM a very creative and well done poem. thank you for commenting on my poem and sorry I took so long to get back to you. I hurt my back and it still hurts to sit very long. Login to Reply

Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 8/5/2011 2:13:00 PM Ah yes...the kitten contest! A fun write and a good interpretation of what may have happened! Good luck with this! xoxo Robert. Login to Reply

Sidney Beck Date: 8/3/2011 10:12:00 AM cute kitten....cute rhyme....very nice...good luck in the contest Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 8/2/2011 1:32:00 PM lol! what a rascally kitten! I almost feel bad for him/her :) good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/2/2011 11:46:00 AM Nice approach to the theme of the hanging out, Barbara Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 8/2/2011 9:57:00 AM good job with this one sounds like a winner. cory Login to Reply

Thvia Shetley Date: 8/2/2011 9:42:00 AM Hi Barbara! Lovely to be back and reading your poetry again. As always, I enjoyed your work! Login to Reply