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Just Desserts and Appetizers

The sherbet orange light of a fall morning in Connecticut crackles with the scent pine. The lake’s parking lot overflows by nine thirty. The S.U.V.s park in a haphazard manor. The boat crew’s flight from reality – or the emersion in it—began in earnest hours ago. Neon-colored, plastic, kayaks adorn the grass skirt before the water’s edge. Dressed in shades as lively as their hulls, the small craft owners match themselves up with their water-horses. They shove off at random intervals.

geese
land and take off –
squirrels scamper

Disturbed, Lake Lillinonah ripples with the dip of paddle and the morning breeze. The cotton wood trees chatter to passing egrets. The smell of powerboats, only slightly mars the bathing-beauty glow of the day. Days end will find a conga line of cars pulling in to a local dairy for homemade ice-cream. Truly, God is in his heaven and all is right – at least here, for these few hours—in the world.

pink tipped tongues
lick sprinkles from the cone:
eyes roll
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Thirtyseven Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 9:05 AM
The weekend has come, and I'm tweeting the winners. Hope you get a few more reads. Again thanks for supporting this contest.
Guzzi Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Thank you for your support ALWAYS!
Nunez Avatar
August 23, 2015 at 9:48 AM
I remember reading this several times. I wonder how come I have not left any comment...but this is indeed a lovely haibun, Debbie.The imagery is so sharp and defined. Congratulations! kim
May Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 8:44 PM
Wonderful write Debbie...Congrats on your win
Tagore Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 12:31 PM
The cotton wood trees chatter to passing egrets... Wonderful write and congrats on the win... Regards, Bobby
Inman Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Lovely poem, Debbie. Love the title.
Thirtyseven Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 10:17 AM
This is one great haibun, I like to go kayaking too, which helped me connect. I really enjoy how you painted this one. My mind is filled with the lake and those on it. Thanks for being part of this competition.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 1:45 AM
Congrats on wonderful win Debbie with this amazing haibun!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 12:33 AM
Debbie my huge congratulations!!!! I echo my previous comment... ~Olive Eloisa =`)
Lawless Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 8:25 PM
Debbie these are the days you file away in hopes of recreating. Well done...as usual.
A  Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 6:33 PM
Debbie, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
Roper Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 12:38 PM
Debbie, congratulations on your win and a 7 the image you have great you have brought to life in this peace. Hugs Eve
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 12:20 PM
Ahh!! Great quality work!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 11:49 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Debbie:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 3:52 AM
I feasted on your amazing imagery Debbie - wow I hope to be able to write like this one day ... one day .... Fabulous write:-) hugs Jan xx 7
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:31 AM
Ahh~~~ We in the south now enjoy peach and strawberry ice cream at the peach packing shed..Enjoyed reading your very descriptive work..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Have a lovely day..Sara
Delaney Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 10:42 PM
What a delightful feast of images. This is an interesting form and you are brilliant with it. Hope you are happy and well. SuZ
La France Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 9:24 PM
Debbi, I enjoyed your Haibun very much, so visual and inviting, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem sisters...
Trifiatis Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Poetically descriptive, captivating and adventurous, dear Debbie. Excellent piece of work!
Muideen Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 4:31 AM
A lovely write and fascinating write here. Excellent.........A.M
Callus Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 4:16 PM
Hi Debbie! You narrate and describe with ease, filling the reader's mind with pleasure. All our senses are activated. Top marks to you. All the best...paul
Richards Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Nobody does it better !!! All's definitely right in the world of poetry!
Pinet Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 10:10 AM
Your words play within our hearts and their magic comes alive and fills us with warm feelings. Emile.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 8:56 AM
It sounds like a perfect afternoon. This is what I love about living near a lake and having an abundance of sunshine.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 6:29 AM
Debbie, i like best the second part... ut sp like the first line of the first!!!! Still am thinking of a good topic here but i like to give a try in this form!!~Olive Eloisa :)
George   Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 3:02 PM
I am not familiar with this form, Debbie, but I love the picture you have imprinted that lingers on in my mind. It has been along time, but I am back for a while. Elaine
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