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Just Breathe

Inside the forestry of his heart I live inhaling the scent of his deep woods I could never fill those Timberlands boots nor explain the thrill that he provides when he arrives at the grove of my soul and whispers, "Darling, I love you " softly cloaked and protected by his pine I am evergreen in moments like these Existing in this charming jungle of love I could never retrace my steps, for arriving in this place of no return I feel as suitable as a thriving conifer Inside this evergreen existence, I just am breathing in the fragrance of his loyalty I feel like a woman in love, ... After a lifetime of bending, to his will I am the wind that blows on his heart when I get to him, I just breathe...

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Date: 12/25/2024 12:11:00 PM
Magnificent! Define rhat and find it here!
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Date: 12/5/2024 10:56:00 PM
When you breathe, this poem has taken my breath away! Such a lovely romantic musing, dear Rose. Missed seeing this as POTD. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD
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Date: 12/5/2024 8:00:00 AM
Thanks for baring your sweet soul through your poetry. A wonderful read and very worthy POTD!!! A belated yahoo and congratulations!
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Date: 12/2/2024 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful "Just Breathe" write with a great ending. Enjoy your day/win....................
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Date: 12/2/2024 12:11:00 AM
wonderful poem, the ending is just touching and universal, congrats for the potd
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Date: 12/1/2024 11:13:00 PM
Vie congratulations on receiving POTD...
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Date: 12/1/2024 8:13:00 PM
Nice potd poem. Congrats.
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Date: 12/1/2024 4:31:00 PM
' I am the wind that blows on his heart, when I get to him, I just breathe. ' So beautiful and romantic, yet emotional and moving, all at the same time. Congratulations Vie, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 12/1/2024 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations, My Dearest Poet, on your POTD. Your poem is simply breathtaking, with magnificent images and metaphors. May your golden pen create many more of such majestic poems! Love and Hugs ~ Mala
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Date: 12/1/2024 3:49:00 PM
breathtaking write dear poet. measured words bound in love... congratulations on POTD. Cheers.
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Date: 12/1/2024 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations on potd
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Date: 12/1/2024 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations sweet Rose! A romantic venture delving into the majestic forest, the mood, metaphors and imagery is none other than intoxicating. Love, xo
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Date: 12/1/2024 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations my dear
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Date: 12/1/2024 8:24:00 AM
Lovely, pine-fragrant poem, Mystic. Congrats on potd, Gershon
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Date: 12/1/2024 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations
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Date: 12/1/2024 7:05:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... Hurray ! - hugs
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Date: 12/1/2024 6:59:00 AM
- "I could never fill those Timberlands boots" ... big shoes to fill ... but you are a part of him ... beautiful and romantic, Vie Rose :) - hugs
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Date: 12/1/2024 6:45:00 AM
Left me breathless Rose. Magnificent...both the poem and the mental artistry it conjures.
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Date: 12/1/2024 6:02:00 AM
Dear Rose, oh what a wonderful romantic poem that is filled with love and adoration. Beautiful and congratulations on POTD! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 12/1/2024 5:06:00 AM
Beautiful poetry, very romantic Vie. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day.. Beryl
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Date: 12/1/2024 4:59:00 AM
Lovely romantic write Vie, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 12/1/2024 4:09:00 AM
First of all, being a great poet, Secondly, being the writer of the Poem Of The Day. Thirdly, which has been a blessing for me, being the first person who congratulated me in this poetry soup... Congratulations!
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Date: 12/1/2024 3:30:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your potd! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/1/2024 3:26:00 AM
What a beautiful poem dearest Vie, I am thrilled to see it got POTD. So well deserved. Congratulations my sweet friend...Hugs
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Date: 12/1/2024 3:11:00 AM
Vie, heartfelt and enchanting, congratulations on POTD.
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