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An abundance of fragrant florets constant reminder of regrets Although they consume the misty air they seem stale, because you're not there Your absence has left a hollow void Ghosts haunt turning the mind paranoid. Just another day without you Oh my love if only you knew How the guitar still strums your song One more day alone seems so wrong The hands of time are no friends of mine Growing old, should have been our shrine In your world full of confusion Life can be full of delusion My love for you still remains supreme Our reunion is my last dream Just another day without you Oh my love if only you knew how the guitar still strums your song One more day alone seems so wrong The heart craves to hear your sweet voice but your departure has left no choice Now only silence is what I hear Life has no sound without you near. Only the room vibrating with cries Won't you save me from this demise Come before this dancer's heart dies Bless me with one last sight of your eyes Just another day without you Oh my love if only you knew how the guitar still strums your song One more day alone seems so wrong Still that guy who made your heart go 'wow' Don't say its that final curtain bow Senorita don't forget our vow My beloved come back to me now Just another day without you Oh my love if only you knew how the guitar still strums your song One more day alone seems so wrong The Silent One Simple Musing 3 November 2017

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Date: 2/27/2018 6:59:00 PM
So romantic...and sad.
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Date: 2/6/2018 6:20:00 AM
Very beautiful!
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Silent One
Date: 2/6/2018 6:24:00 AM
Thanks.. Good reminder, sometimes I forget the poems I have written..
Date: 11/28/2017 8:29:00 PM
Nicely done! I hope she hears your cry too!
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Silent One
Date: 2/6/2018 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Peter...
Date: 11/14/2017 7:22:00 AM
Silent, This song screams......Lonely! A Rembrandt of regret! You are a song painter! My best to you!
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Date: 11/7/2017 2:46:00 PM
- Who can avoid being "soft" of this beautiful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise..
Date: 11/7/2017 2:31:00 PM
Senorita...should make the dream come true.Listen to the song..to the dance ..to the music...She must go to him..to the one...to his arms..She must find her wayhome.What a beauty of a poem this is.
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine..
Date: 11/7/2017 12:35:00 PM
Wow, I can hear the dulcet melody behind those words you write. It speaks of such loneliness and yearning. great poem, thanks for sharing dear man :) lullooo
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Silent One
Date: 11/9/2017 5:48:00 PM
Thank you Lulloo..
Date: 11/6/2017 5:22:00 AM
Fabulously haunting lyric, my friend. The verses, the bridge, the chorus everything is so well structured. Love it. A fav for sure.
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2017 3:01:00 PM
Thank you Afzal..
Date: 11/5/2017 11:26:00 PM
Beautiful heart touching poem and video/ song that brought tears to my eyes~excellent emotive write Silent One!~Che :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2017 3:01:00 PM
Thank you Cheryl..
Date: 11/5/2017 11:24:00 PM
Great like always... the refrain is like a beautiful Ghazal....
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2017 3:04:00 PM
Thank you my friend..
Date: 11/5/2017 7:15:00 PM
This would make a lovely song with guitar. I especially liked the middle part, and bless me with the sight of your eyes. Awesome refrain!
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2017 3:05:00 PM
Thank you, I agree and I think many on here could sing the lyrics..
Date: 11/5/2017 8:09:00 AM
Fabulous...that guitar strumming, Silent, is sure to bring her back. Full of longing...I loved this piece.
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2017 3:07:00 PM
Thank you Eileen..
Date: 11/4/2017 6:44:00 PM
You Have endowed this poem with much emotion and that's what a great poem all about take care
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2017 3:08:00 PM
Thank you Jerry..
Date: 11/4/2017 2:45:00 PM
I knew you were a musician.
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2017 3:07:00 PM
Not really my friend... Would hardly say that..
Date: 11/4/2017 8:31:00 AM
A beautiful yet sad lyric Silent One... I like the refrain.. as you said in your comment on my poem 'there is no goodbye for those who love with their hearts'..
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Silent One
Date: 11/4/2017 11:02:00 AM
Thank you Joseph... Yes, you are right...
Date: 11/4/2017 7:52:00 AM
Your words float on a beautiful sadness. Well done!
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Silent One
Date: 11/4/2017 10:57:00 AM
Very poetically put Richard... Thank you
Date: 11/4/2017 5:22:00 AM
My God this is so touching.. how write it ?
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Silent One
Date: 11/6/2017 11:27:00 AM
What do you mean?
Date: 11/4/2017 2:09:00 AM
This is beautifully written and sparked my emotions. I began to cry and must admit that it really is a special writing lyrically. Thank you for sharing.
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Silent One
Date: 11/4/2017 10:21:00 AM
Thank you Kristina.. Its nice you could feel the emotions..
Date: 11/3/2017 10:13:00 PM
A beautiful song of heartbreak and longing penned so poetically and poignantly of how your heart still beats for your beloved... Excellent,moving and enjoyed!
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Silent One
Date: 11/4/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Susan...
Date: 11/3/2017 9:58:00 PM
A most beautiful lyrical composition Si. Poignant, bitter sweet, sensitive and emotional write for your friend - The music is particularly in tune with the sentiments of your song. Loved it and the cute film clip ...Maria
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Silent One
Date: 11/4/2017 10:19:00 AM
Thank you Maria.. IT is from the movie called UP, a sentimental heart warming movie... Something to watch with your grand children...
Date: 11/3/2017 7:27:00 PM
A very moving and sentimental read. A touching melody. I can feel your pain from each verse reaching out ....one more day alone seems so wrong. Beautifully done.
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Silent One
Date: 11/4/2017 10:17:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne, this is not a personal experience for me.. It is about a friend of mine..
Date: 11/3/2017 2:35:00 PM
Beautiful emotive write, Silent One. Simultaneously poignant and enchanting. Well written to match the clip. // Barry
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Silent One
Date: 11/3/2017 3:47:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 11/3/2017 12:05:00 PM
Beautifully written. I love the sentiment in it. Captured it perfectly. xx
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Silent One
Date: 11/3/2017 3:48:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 11/3/2017 11:29:00 AM
So touching So, brought me to tears, very close to home for me, it's healing to remember the good times, and there were a lot of them, hopefully one day she will remember me! Thanks so much for your kindness. Who said you can't write lyrics, this was beautiful!
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Silent One
Date: 11/3/2017 3:51:00 PM
Im happy you could resonate.. be string my friend.. The universe has a way or working things out... Thank you for your feedback
Date: 11/3/2017 9:10:00 AM
Beautiful, Like A Melody To A Heart Wrenching Song.
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Silent One
Date: 11/3/2017 9:52:00 AM
Thank you..
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