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Just Another Day Without You

An abundance of fragrant florets 
constant reminder of regrets
Although they consume the misty air
they seem stale, because you're not there
Your absence has left a hollow void
Ghosts haunt turning the mind paranoid.

Just another day without you
Oh my love if only you knew
How the guitar still strums your song
One more day alone seems so wrong

The hands of time are no friends of mine
Growing old, should have been our shrine
In your world full of confusion
Life can be full of delusion
My love for you still remains supreme
Our reunion is my last dream

Just another day without you
Oh my love if only you knew
how the guitar still strums your song
One more day alone seems so wrong

The heart craves to hear your sweet voice
but your departure has left no choice
Now only silence is what I hear
Life has no sound without you near.
Only the room vibrating with cries
Won't you save me from this demise
Come before this dancer's heart dies
Bless me with one last sight of your eyes

Just another day without you
Oh my love if only you knew
how the guitar still strums your song
One more day alone seems so wrong

Still that guy who made your heart go 'wow'
Don't say its that final curtain bow
Senorita don't forget our vow
My beloved come back to me now

Just another day without you
Oh my love if only you knew
how the guitar still strums your song
One more day alone seems so wrong

The Silent One
Simple Musing
3 November 2017

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Andrew Resital February 6, 2018 at 6:20 AM Very beautiful! Silent One February 6, 2018 at 6:24 AM Thanks.. Good reminder, sometimes I forget the poems I have written..

Jeannie Cronin November 28, 2017 at 8:29 PM Nicely done! I hope she hears your cry too! Silent One February 6, 2018 at 6:24 AM Thank you Peter...

Chuck Melugin November 14, 2017 at 7:22 AM Silent, This song screams......Lonely! A Rembrandt of regret! You are a song painter! My best to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2017 at 2:46 PM - Who can avoid being "soft" of this beautiful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Silent One November 9, 2017 at 5:49 PM Thank you Anne-Lise..

Charmaine Chircop November 7, 2017 at 2:31 PM Senorita...should make the dream come true.Listen to the song..to the dance ..to the music...She must go to him..to the one...to his arms..She must find her wayhome.What a beauty of a poem this is. Silent One November 9, 2017 at 5:49 PM Thank you Charmaine..

Beautiful Scars November 7, 2017 at 12:35 PM Wow, I can hear the dulcet melody behind those words you write. It speaks of such loneliness and yearning. great poem, thanks for sharing dear man :) lullooo Silent One November 9, 2017 at 5:48 PM Thank you Lulloo..

Afzal Nusker November 6, 2017 at 5:22 AM Fabulously haunting lyric, my friend. The verses, the bridge, the chorus everything is so well structured. Love it. A fav for sure. Silent One November 6, 2017 at 3:01 PM Thank you Afzal..

Cheryl Hoffman November 5, 2017 at 11:26 PM Beautiful heart touching poem and video/ song that brought tears to my eyes~excellent emotive write Silent One!~Che :) Silent One November 6, 2017 at 3:01 PM Thank you Cheryl..

Pashang Salehi November 5, 2017 at 11:24 PM Great like always... the refrain is like a beautiful Ghazal.... Silent One November 6, 2017 at 3:04 PM Thank you my friend..

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2017 at 7:15 PM This would make a lovely song with guitar. I especially liked the middle part, and bless me with the sight of your eyes. Awesome refrain! Silent One November 6, 2017 at 3:05 PM Thank you, I agree and I think many on here could sing the lyrics..

Eileen Manassian November 5, 2017 at 8:09 AM Fabulous...that guitar strumming, Silent, is sure to bring her back. Full of longing...I loved this piece. Silent One November 6, 2017 at 3:07 PM Thank you Eileen..

Jerry T Curtis November 4, 2017 at 6:44 PM You Have endowed this poem with much emotion and that's what a great poem all about take care Silent One November 6, 2017 at 3:08 PM Thank you Jerry..

Joseph May November 4, 2017 at 8:31 AM A beautiful yet sad lyric Silent One... I like the refrain.. as you said in your comment on my poem 'there is no goodbye for those who love with their hearts'.. Silent One November 4, 2017 at 11:02 AM Thank you Joseph... Yes, you are right...

Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2017 at 7:52 AM Your words float on a beautiful sadness. Well done! Silent One November 4, 2017 at 10:57 AM Very poetically put Richard... Thank you

Isor Chand November 4, 2017 at 5:22 AM My God this is so touching.. how write it ? Silent One November 6, 2017 at 11:27 AM What do you mean?

Kristina Whitmore November 4, 2017 at 2:09 AM This is beautifully written and sparked my emotions. I began to cry and must admit that it really is a special writing lyrically. Thank you for sharing. Silent One November 4, 2017 at 10:21 AM Thank you Kristina.. Its nice you could feel the emotions..

Susan Ashley November 3, 2017 at 10:13 PM A beautiful song of heartbreak and longing penned so poetically and poignantly of how your heart still beats for your beloved... Excellent,moving and enjoyed! Silent One November 4, 2017 at 10:19 AM Thank you Susan...

Maria Williams November 3, 2017 at 9:58 PM A most beautiful lyrical composition Si. Poignant, bitter sweet, sensitive and emotional write for your friend - The music is particularly in tune with the sentiments of your song. Loved it and the cute film clip ...Maria Silent One November 4, 2017 at 10:19 AM Thank you Maria.. IT is from the movie called UP, a sentimental heart warming movie... Something to watch with your grand children...

Suzanne C. Goudreau November 3, 2017 at 7:27 PM A very moving and sentimental read. A touching melody. I can feel your pain from each verse reaching out ....one more day alone seems so wrong. Beautifully done. Silent One November 4, 2017 at 10:17 AM Thank you Suzanne, this is not a personal experience for me.. It is about a friend of mine..

Barry Stebbings November 3, 2017 at 2:35 PM Beautiful emotive write, Silent One. Simultaneously poignant and enchanting. Well written to match the clip. // Barry Silent One November 3, 2017 at 3:47 PM Thank you..

Jane Shields November 3, 2017 at 12:05 PM Beautifully written. I love the sentiment in it. Captured it perfectly. xx Silent One November 3, 2017 at 3:48 PM Thank you

John Hamilton November 3, 2017 at 11:29 AM So touching So, brought me to tears, very close to home for me, it's healing to remember the good times, and there were a lot of them, hopefully one day she will remember me! Thanks so much for your kindness. Who said you can't write lyrics, this was beautiful! Silent One November 3, 2017 at 3:51 PM Im happy you could resonate.. be string my friend.. The universe has a way or working things out... Thank you for your feedback

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer November 3, 2017 at 9:10 AM Beautiful, Like A Melody To A Heart Wrenching Song. Silent One November 3, 2017 at 9:52 AM Thank you..

Heidi Sands November 3, 2017 at 8:29 AM This is a beautiful sweet poem filled with emotion the reader can feel. I love the video you chose to put with it too. Well done Silent one! Have a nice day :) Silent One November 3, 2017 at 9:52 AM Thank you..

Demetrios Trifiatis November 3, 2017 at 8:25 AM Your Muse amplifies the lyrics of your heart so its song is heard in heavens my friend, S.O. ! Superb! Silent One November 3, 2017 at 9:53 AM Thank you..

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