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Just An Old Sinner

It was in I in word and deed I followed my own lust You suffered and died the Price of Peace Even I being evil you looked past the leper in me The spotted ringstraked the one lost sheep It was I in word and deed In your full view nothing was hid Even I being evil you looked past the leper in me From stolen penny candy to the torturing grayfish to king of the ant hill to drunkenness of endless filth Blushing now for sin I committed then It was I in word and deed The lying raping to the hypocrite on the bus In a word I thought I knew better You suffered and died the Price of Peace Even I being evil you looked past the leper in me It was I in word and deed Brawling stealing adulterous hurting killing tongue Even I as I begun in word and deed I followed my own lust You suffered and died the Price of Peace Even I being evil looked past the leper in me Jesus is risen in deed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/2/2010 1:23:00 PM
Really deep write and some will always look past the flaws really strong lines and a more than good read really great job
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:43:00 PM
Great faith write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/30/2010 5:39:00 PM
wow, very powerful this one and a passionate write about Christ's endless capacity for forgiveness. Loved the repititions you used in this poem for effectiveness ,particularly the line "the leper in me". LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/30/2010 4:46:00 PM
yes , Carolyn it would be I have hope one day we will all try to out Love one another if you will and Jesus is the only way in another city not so far away with Love in Christ Jesus john
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Date: 1/30/2010 4:23:00 PM
Christ's capacity for forgiveness is a model for all of us to emulate, John. If there were a way to "look past the leper" in each individual, we would have a more peaceful and harmonious society. Enjoyed reading this spiritually uplifting write! Love, Carolyn
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