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Just a Mouse

This place is full of bigness the dog is big, the masters foot is big And I am small, a mouse, a house mouse I scurry about in the dark crumbs are beautiful things, I eat But I feel small, a mouse, a house mouse I am warm and dry, but afraid I live my life afraid, of their bigness, of the cat, of hunger, of being caught The little girl smiled... She said, a little darling, cutest thing! Mama,, look a mouse.. I am not a thinker, simple me Just a mouse, a house mouse....
Barbara Gorelick Personify an Animal contest

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Date: 1/28/2014 3:49:00 PM
Barbara, CONGRATULATIONS, a very clever write, you did well in "Personifing Any Animal of Your Choosing" *enjoyed every poem.......... ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/5/2014 12:52:00 AM
Enjoyed the personification and congrats on your win, Barbara
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Date: 12/25/2013 4:17:00 PM
Very cute. I once had a mouse in my bedroom. I was so terrified, I took some books and locked myself in the bathroom for two weeks. came out still scare but a much wiser man.Thanx for sharing well done. Pete.
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Date: 12/19/2013 12:41:00 PM
you did it. great entry,
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Date: 12/17/2013 5:49:00 PM
Interesting personification for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are valuable to me..Sara
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Date: 12/17/2013 4:57:00 PM
wondeful personification poem Barbara...thank you so much for your visit...I hope they enjoy it...Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/16/2013 3:11:00 PM
this is great idea to personify the house mouse. I am going to be my dog Ollyver. Who I lost a long time ago. Gotta get around to writing as if I am that dog. He was pretty dumb but I sure loved him. Merry Xmas, Barbara.
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Date: 12/16/2013 8:39:00 AM
- I think mouse are cute. . . well written, Barbara. - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/16/2013 5:32:00 AM
Lovely personification of a house mouse, Barbara
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