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Just a Moment--

Hush quietly, just a moment; Just breathe, believe receive this endorsement; The sun does shine after the rain And it's spring and grasses and flowers grow; Just a moment; ~ A baby crawls; Some months later he walks the halls; As a order learns to play plastic/rubber balls; Hush quietly, just a moment; Just breathe, believe receive this endorsement; Just a moment; ~ You're in your recliner; Just a little tired; Summertime doorbell rings; Slowly you rise ring-ring-ringVerbally you sigh...just a moment;
7/26/20 7th place Placement in Contest JUST A MOMENT Poetry Contest Sponsored by:John lawless

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Date: 8/4/2020 10:09:00 PM
James, I love your musings on the phrase 'just a moment' and how you brought us through the stages of life with this charming vignette. Congratulations and keep writing your gems!
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:49:00 PM
You've penned the moments in the journey of life beautifully James. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 8/4/2020 6:38:00 AM
A fun read, James. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/4/2020 5:40:00 AM
Ah, the seasons of life and its many fleeting moments so beautifully captured in this poem. Thanks for entering the contest James
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Date: 7/26/2020 9:03:00 AM
The feelings in this poem were so well penned, James.
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James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 7/26/2020 10:53:00 AM
Much appreciated your kind comments. Stay safe and be well. Caren Write On!

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