Get Your Premium Membership

Just a Little Bit of Sugar

Catching flies “You catch more flies with sugar,” oh yes, that’s what they say If even just a little bit those bugs will come your way But somehow I have noticed as this saying I explore You’ll catch more flies with something else that’s rotten to the core I sprinkled just a little bit of sweetness on my place And noticed that a few of them were flying round my face But when I lifted up the lid exposing last night’s meal A thousand little buzzing things approached the peas and veal That made me think perhaps it’s wrong, this saying that they use These insects may like sugar but it’s garbage that they chose Which made me much more curious about these things they say So now I pose the question, “Who would want flies anyway?” 2/24/17 Written for the: Little bit of sugar poetry contest Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/25/2017 5:30:00 PM
Oh wow, Chris...I'm experiencing a rare mixture of amusement and nausea. That doesn't happen too often...LOL. Still, I love it! Lots of luck in the contest...hugs, Rhonda
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 2/27/2017 8:30:00 AM
That's funny, thanks so much Rhonda
Date: 2/24/2017 11:29:00 AM
Don't forget about the maggots...lol
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2017 11:42:00 AM
Yeah, it was just a little early in the morning and I didn't want to gross people out too much. :) Thanks Tim
Date: 2/24/2017 10:38:00 AM
You do humor well, Chris. Very funny indeed:)
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 2/24/2017 10:12:00 AM
That you can bring smiles with 'flies' in poetry is a wonderment! :-) This is exceptional writing! My best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2017 10:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Lynn. I believe this is my very first poetic fly mention. :)
Date: 2/24/2017 9:58:00 AM
A little bit of patience, a little bit of love, a little drop of poison... A little this, a little that. A lot of flies, and stinking truth :) Wonderful entry Chris, good luck!
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I thought a little humor might bring a few smiles this morning
Date: 2/24/2017 9:02:00 AM
Well, what appears to us sweet it might not be their preferable thing dear, Chris! A very fitting poem for the contest!
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2017 9:58:00 AM
Yep, one man's trash is another flies treasure. :) Thanks my friend.
Date: 2/24/2017 8:45:00 AM
To sum it up what would they choose; last line of Winnie the ….! Enjoyed your take on it and G/L in the contest!~Che :)
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2017 9:57:00 AM
Thanks again Cheryl, you are right. Ha, and all this time he thought they were attracted to his honey. :)
Date: 2/24/2017 8:31:00 AM
Lol not sure anyone wants to attract flies. I enjoyed this write :)
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 2/24/2017 9:56:00 AM
Thanks so much Carol. I am happy you liked my bit of poetic humor.

Book: Shattered Sighs