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SUMMER RAIN PAINTING - A SUMMER SHOWER, Carrie McKenzie

Just a Light Summer's Rain

When the sun kisses each drop of rain,
spirited colors warm the heart...
like a wind wisped feather,
landing lightly on the soul.

Romance calls,
from a fresh faint whisper
mingled cleverly among the fallen.

A daydream smiles,
in a seductive voice.

Conjured  memories evolve,
from indifference to fact,
plunging deep into fantasy,
erotically eager,
intoxicatingly anxious.

All is euphorically joyful.

05/16/2021<>
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 3:31 AM
Hi Charlie, just dropped by to say hello, hope you are doing well:)
Mcdaid Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 11:44 AM
Your words sing a song, very beautifully penned dear brother
Lindley Avatar
May 31, 2023 at 9:04 AM
Your verses sing to me. Brilliant poetry my friend. A gem and a fav too.
Agustin Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 4:04 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
Sands Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 8:02 AM
How are you Charlie? I hope all is ok. :)
Smith Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 10:48 PM
Doing fine Heidi I've been writing books how are you?
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 2:04 PM
Another gem from you Charlie!! rain and romance!! they go together!!
Smith Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 7:03 PM
ThankYou Krish
Daniel Avatar
August 12, 2021 at 1:49 AM
Hi Charlie, long time, no see, how are you doing? sending greetings and regards:)
Smith Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Thank you Jo, doing great
Goldsmith Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 9:04 AM
What a wonderful story/write and picture. I love the rain. Have a blessed day writing away................
Smith Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 4:59 PM
Thank you Paula...
Wolf Avatar
June 23, 2021 at 6:17 PM
If it starts to rain around you, the woman has by your side is in for a delightful experience there, Charlie. Sweet, gw
Smith Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Thanks Gershon,,,
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 4:38 PM
Hello Charlie Smith, I like the rainfall. I enjoy to walk in the rain. I like to listen to the rain pouring to the ground. A beautiful sound. Enjoy your evening m=y friend.
Smith Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 10:16 AM
Thanks Darlene...
Dutta Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 10:26 PM
BEAUTIFUL I like RAINS under SUN. Thanks for visiting me after a long time. Best Wishes.
Smith Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 10:17 AM
Thanks Anisha...
Rose  Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 3:30 PM
It can be so romantic getting lost in the rain with the one you love. You have jogged my memory to a beautiful moment, thank you Charlie
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 4:09 PM
Thank You Rose...
Deo Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Thank U Captain! Took me somewheres ... shalom, shalom, Anil DEO
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Thanks Anil...
Roper Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 7:57 PM
Fresh scent of rain drops recalling old memories that still linger of love and romance. Well said, Charlie. <3
Smith Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 11:50 AM
Thanks Eve...
Sands Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 2:21 PM
This is great Charlie. Creative lines, powerful ending. A fave for me too :)
Smith Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 11:27 AM
Thanks Heidi...
Daniel Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 7:05 AM
Wow! Amazed by this one, Charlie, goes straight into my faves, such enchanting imagery:)
Smith Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Thank you Jo...
Stebbings Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Sun kissed rain drops - love the imagery in this piece. // Barry
Smith Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Thanks Barry...
Trifiatis Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 8:27 AM
A joyful poem written by the heart, my dearest friend Charlie. Blessings.
Smith Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 7:32 AM
Thank you Demetrios...
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May 16, 2021 at 8:05 PM
A refreshing write. Thanks got your visit.
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 6:02 AM
thanks Richard...
Pandit Avatar
May 16, 2021 at 2:24 PM
Little summer rain evokes whispers of love. Enjoyed the euphoric ending of your poem, Charlie.
Smith Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Thanks Vijay...
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