Just a Cliche

Although it's a well worn cliche,
there is something soothing
in the thought of lying in bed 
listening to rain. Last night 
I was front row in a symphony.
An adagio of soft fall, murmurings 
on a metal roof and whispers
running along gutters.  
Calm in the tempo  
of raindrops, muted gargles 
and gulps echoed inside
the throats of downpipes.

Then everything changed.
A quickening pace heralded 
heavy rain and hailstones 
falling in a roar of wind.
Lightning flashed
behind curtains, thunder
drew nearer, giant, swollen
bags of noise burst
to come crashing down,
rattling windows and sending
the spill rushing through  
doorways into tense rooms.

Heaven unleashed its might, 
as if trying to tear itself away
from this world, 
as it still does, weighted 
with words and held here
on a page, longing to lift
into song with drum rolls
and tremble in a crescendo 
fit for a thousand voices,
straining to break free
and fly somewhere else,
finding itself stuck
in a poem, slowly drifting
towards sleep
and oblivion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Lane Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 7:31 AM
The murmurings of a gentle rain are soothing to me as well. Love the comparison to an orchestra's symphony. I was married to a musical composer, so I learned the importance of highs and lows... changes in rhythm. It's an experience like being thunderstruck.
Willason Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 7:33 PM
I think there is a musical element in poetry...apart from the rhythms and beat...like music there is that special something that transcends the words...communicates directly at the level of feeling and emotions. You have a trained ear as always...thanks my friend.
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