Reason A. Poteet Poet Alliteration

Junk - Jobless Jack

Jobless Jack, a real jerk, dances a jig,
He juggles, smuggles jewels in backpacks,
jawbreakers, jump ropes, jelly rolls and crack.
~~Jig be up,  Jack'll  jiggle in the brig.~~

Junk jingles and jangles, squeals like a pig
jerked and jacked from joints on his pickup routes.
Amid crates of jackets, jeans, and jump suits,
Jobless Jack, a real jerk, dances a jig,

Jack jimmied the Jaguar trunk of some prig;               
 now Judge Judy’s searching Jack's jalopy.
“Jumping Jehoshaphat, what’s this jersey?"
~~Jig be up,  Jack'll  jiggle in the brig.~~

Jobless Jack, a real jerk, dances a jig,
her missing jersey was what the judge found.
~~Jig be up,  Jack'll  jiggle in the brig.~


written 1/31/2018
a villonet

Sponsor	Constance La France
Contest Name	''J'' Contest, New or Old

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Constance La France September 15, 2021 at 6:50 AM Reason, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Reason A. Poteet May 14, 2018 at 6:19 PM Maybe a little overdone, but all in fun. I appreciate you comment.

Line Gauthier May 13, 2018 at 9:08 PM This alliteration is brilliant, Reason. Love it.

Gershon Wolf February 23, 2018 at 2:25 PM I'm sending this one to Jersey Jerry, the 'J-walker.' Kudos, gw Reason A. Poteet May 12, 2018 at 7:20 PM thanks, Gershon. Appreciate your time and energy.

Silent One January 31, 2018 at 12:52 PM p.s it is 2018 :) Reason A. Poteet January 31, 2018 at 7:48 PM 2018? So it is; would hate to miss this whole next year. It holds much promise. Thanks, Silent One, for taking the time to comment and point out my typo. Have a great next write.

Silent One January 31, 2018 at 12:52 PM Great alliteration in your rhyme poem.. This flows really well and is a great read..