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a paradise of plumage, swoops through the tall tangled trees, spreading seeds in the forest- loud calls and songs fill the breeze . . . Jueju/qijue form - 7 syllable lines ____________________________________ a glass butterfly, with transparent wings, rests on a wet fern- oh such lovely things! Jueju/wujue form - 5 syllables ___________________________________ February 27, 2017 Jueju

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Date: 3/29/2017 1:06:00 PM
gorgeous, well-defined poetry to illustrate the form new to many of us, BW. An absolute 7 on both.
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Date: 3/25/2017 9:18:00 PM
Nice, Broken Wings, need to give it a try.... ~*
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Date: 2/28/2017 4:49:00 AM
I like the imagery here, Constance:) "a paradise of plumage" - lovely indeed:) a 7:)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 7:02:00 PM
Jo thanks for the lovely ~
Date: 2/27/2017 4:58:00 PM
this is cool, Constance. You are exploring a new form here? I especially liked the shorter one.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 7:03:00 PM
Andrea thanks for visiting. . Yes I like to try new forms
Date: 2/27/2017 9:43:00 AM
Loveliness in doppelgänger beauty! 7
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 7:04:00 PM
Kim thanks for the lovely
Date: 2/27/2017 7:19:00 AM
Lovely poetry filled with glistening colour and vibrant soundscape in so few words, I commend thee and a 7 xomo
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 7:07:00 PM
Maureen thanks for the sweet comment and the 7!