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Daisy, Flowers, Chamomile

June's Pride June's summer haze a craze on lazy days, while memory plays to bring back youthful ways, of swimming fun and splashing in the sun, downtime of none until the day is done. So, let’s keep cool because there’s no more school and as a rule, June’s fire warms up the pool. Orange moon of June soon moves and proves folks choose to share good news not winter blues. June’s pride is leaves so green they vanish trees, with pleasing tease of a soft zephyr breeze and hotter heat that has sweet Springtime beat, the joy of ice cream treats and beach chair seats. A happy time when two might say, "I do," or caps and gowns of things renown conclude. June’s sunny side's where pleasures do reside, a summer place that wears a face of pride. 6/2/17 BRIAN'S select D

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Date: 8/12/2017 4:10:00 PM
Whoa, this poem rocks, Janis! Great rhymes, had me bouncing in my seat. Cool summer poetry for real. Love and smiles.
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Date: 8/7/2017 12:05:00 PM
Oh Janis, this is one of your best in my eyes! Sublime inner rhyme as well as a delightful homage to summer fun! I love it and am faving it! Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! : )
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/7/2017 2:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie. Check soup mail. Blessings, Janis
Date: 8/6/2017 3:28:00 PM
Very nice write Janice, just loved the internal rhyme, and everything about this write, very appealing, congrats on a fine top win!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 8/7/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thanks, John. Glad I could make the contest requirement.s

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