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June's Heat

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Than-Bauk Variation Contest of Kim Rodrigues 3 September 24

beads of pearled dew--- tap on dried boughs ending June's heat

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/23/2024 12:00:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2024 11:57:00 AM

Hurrah for your first place. Congrats, dear friend

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/18/2024 9:24:00 AM

Clever, Nette, had to look twice for the "d" word hiding in the third line. Well-said, congratulations.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/18/2024 7:31:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win, Nette. Janice

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/17/2024 9:53:00 PM

congratulations dear poet.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/17/2024 5:46:00 PM

Lovely imagery! Congratulations, Nette!

Karen Croft

Date: 9/14/2024 6:06:00 PM

I can picture this very clearly!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/12/2024 9:37:00 PM

Dear Nette, you have a way of combining words that are striking and evocative, creating a sensorial experience in just three lines of verse! Enchanting poetry! Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2024 2:15:00 PM

Great work. I enjoyed reading this one. If the contest is not judged, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2024 11:03:00 AM

I love this, Nette. I could be wrong, but I think the repeating letter falls on syllable 2 of the last line

Ink Empress

Date: 9/7/2024 7:47:00 AM

Your than bauk is pretty and well written dear nette! The way you paint imagery is always so very impressive and so creative! Im sure this will do very well! Best wishes! Sending you light always

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/5/2024 10:28:00 AM

Nette, these three lines are so vividly visual! Love the word "tap" especially when paired with "dried boughs." And, I have to admit I do love June and the warm days. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings of cool breezes!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/5/2024 9:28:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "June's Heat" write. Glad June with her heart is gone. Come on Autumn... "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away...............

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/3/2024 12:47:00 AM

Love the month of June with the heat and long days. Good luck in the contest Nette. Tom

Paige Hind

Date: 9/2/2024 8:00:00 PM

A beautiful poem- I'm sure she'll like it <3

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/2/2024 5:33:00 PM

Picture perfect...Nette