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Under childish thumb picking dandelion teeth stained in ochre crumb.

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Date: 2/21/2024 5:12:00 AM
Dear Kate, Your poem is a beautiful snapshot of innocence and simplicity. The imagery of picking dandelions evokes a sense of nostalgia and the delicate beauty of childhood. Thank you for capturing this moment with such elegance.- Blessings, Daniel
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