Maclawrence Famuyiwa Poet Tanka

Junco

bold in winter's cold~
cruise in peace with no bruises
yet predict lightning 
to warn and heed nature's call
for spiritual rebirth







Contest:High Fives for June
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich
Contest Judged: June 24th, 2025 1:02:00 PM
Placement: Third

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Linda Alice Fowler July 1, 2025 at 9:40 AM Lovely flight Maclawrence. Nice tanka. Congratulations! :) Maclawrence Famuyiwa July 1, 2025 at 10:36 AM Many thanks. Linda.

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2025 at 1:49 PM I didn't know it predicted lightning! thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your win Maclawrence Famuyiwa June 25, 2025 at 8:14 AM Thanks for the placement.