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Junco

bold in winter's cold~
cruise in peace with no bruises
yet predict lightning 
to warn and heed nature's call
for spiritual rebirth







Contest:High Fives for June
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich
Contest Judged: June 24th, 2025 1:02:00 PM
Placement: Third 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 7/1/2025 9:40:00 AM
Lovely flight Maclawrence. Nice tanka. Congratulations! :)
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 7/1/2025 10:36:00 AM
Many thanks. Linda.
Date: 6/24/2025 1:49:00 PM
I didn't know it predicted lightning! thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your win
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 6/25/2025 8:14:00 AM
Thanks for the placement.

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