Kim Rodrigues Poet Pantoum

Jumping in Autumn

Fall in love, jumping in Autumn.
Splash of hues, refusing wither.
Leaping off, cushioning bottom.
Littering leaves in a dither.

Splash of hues, refusing wither.
Monotone rainbows in clothing.
Litter of leaves in a dither.
Burnt orange, maple reds, gloating.

Monotone rainbows in clothing.
Shaken off, adding to pile of
Burnt orange, maple reds gloating.
Looking on - mother-trees proud of.

Shaken off, adding to pile of.
Growing up, moments of winging.
Looking on - mother-trees proud of
Sailing sons, daughters caught springing.

Growing up, moments of winging.
Leaping off, cushioning bottom.
Sailing sons, daughters caught springing.
Fall in love jumping in Autumn. 

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Valsa George September 28, 2025 at 10:26 PM You always stand apart from others in your treatment of topics. This poem is outstanding in its metaphoric content and uniqueness of style. An outstanding pantoum. Kim Rodrigues September 29, 2025 at 10:41 AM I so appreciate you, Valsa! Thank you!

Hilda Greenhough September 27, 2025 at 11:58 AM You've created a beautiful poem from a pile of leaves. Pure genius. I enjoyed the use of colors. It blazes in my mind. Kim Rodrigues September 29, 2025 at 10:43 AM Thank you, sweet one!

Sotto Poet September 27, 2025 at 8:37 AM The metaphoric language in your fall writing is truly colorful! A wonderful pantoum. Regards Kim Rodrigues September 27, 2025 at 10:59 AM Thank you, Lasaad!

Susan Ashley September 26, 2025 at 7:18 PM Dear Kim, the evocative imagery of your autumn poem is vibrant! An exceptional pantoum. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Kim Rodrigues September 27, 2025 at 6:00 AM Thank you, Susan! Blessings your way!

Abdullah Alhemaidy September 26, 2025 at 5:46 PM Beautiful lovely write! Kim Rodrigues September 27, 2025 at 6:01 AM Thank you, dear Abdullah!

sara Etgen-Baker September 26, 2025 at 5:04 PM outstanding Pantoum, Kim......an enchanting poem through and through, hugs, Sara Kim Rodrigues September 27, 2025 at 6:02 AM So glad you found it enchanting! It is always a poet’s sport to find unique ways of expression. God bless you, my friend!

CayCay Godwin September 26, 2025 at 3:39 PM I cannot get to the end of a well written Pantoum without smiling. Such fun to write when one loves words. This is a delight, love its sound and I appreciate being gifted a smile. Kim Rodrigues September 27, 2025 at 6:02 AM A poet has fun playing with words. Thank you and God bless!

Paige Hind September 26, 2025 at 2:16 PM Woah, really woah, Kim- I am enchanted and in awe of this Autumn beauty "..."Growing up, moments of winging. Leaping off, cushioning bottom. <3 mmmm, an inspiration and A FAV :) Kim Rodrigues September 26, 2025 at 3:37 PM Thank you so much!