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Jumbles Last Rumble

Squeeze some more stuff in closet,
Daily make more deposits,
Piled sky high of clothes jumble,
Open door and hear rumble.




3-20-17

clotheshumorjueju

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Kim Merryman

April 7, 2017 at 7:39 PM

This made me smile, Cheryl. Cute jueju! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Cheryl Hoffman

April 8, 2017 at 7:55 AM

Thank you so much for very kind comment and visit Kim! Placement was a nice surprise!~Blessings to you too~Che :)

James Inman

April 3, 2017 at 8:36 AM

Cheryl, I can see it in my mind ...and in my daughter's closet.

Cheryl Hoffman

April 3, 2017 at 8:37 AM

I think a lot of us females have that same kind of closet James! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit!~Che :)

John Beam

April 3, 2017 at 6:56 AM

Congratulation on your win, Cheryl. I reckon it is spring cleaning time.

Cheryl Hoffman

April 3, 2017 at 8:41 AM

You reckon right John! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit!~Che :)

Andrea Dietrich

April 2, 2017 at 7:49 PM

haha, it's MY closet described here. Love this.

Cheryl Hoffman

April 2, 2017 at 9:32 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Andrea; I think a lot of us females have to watch out for closet avalanches lol!~Che :)

Constance La France

April 2, 2017 at 4:45 PM

Cheryl congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju it reminds me of my closet

Cheryl Hoffman

April 2, 2017 at 7:34 PM

Thanks so much for placing me as one of the winners BW; a very nice surprise!~Che:)

Alexis Y.

March 20, 2017 at 11:07 PM

Hi Cheryl, I'm not that familiar with this form. I think you did good. I must say I'm well acquainted with the "scene" you created with words:-) Alexis

Cheryl Hoffman

March 20, 2017 at 11:17 PM

Lol, watch out for clothes "avalanche!" Thanks for very kind comment and visit Alexis!~Che :)

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