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Jumbles Last Rumble

Squeeze some more stuff in closet, Daily make more deposits, Piled sky high of clothes jumble, Open door and hear rumble. 3-20-17

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/7/2017 7:39:00 PM

This made me smile, Cheryl. Cute jueju! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/8/2017 7:55:00 AM

Thank you so much for very kind comment and visit Kim! Placement was a nice surprise!~Blessings to you too~Che :)

James Inman

Date: 4/3/2017 8:36:00 AM

Cheryl, I can see it in my mind ...and in my daughter's closet.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/3/2017 8:37:00 AM

I think a lot of us females have that same kind of closet James! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit!~Che :)

John Beam

Date: 4/3/2017 6:56:00 AM

Congratulation on your win, Cheryl. I reckon it is spring cleaning time.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/3/2017 8:41:00 AM

You reckon right John! Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit!~Che :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 7:49:00 PM

haha, it's MY closet described here. Love this.

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/2/2017 9:32:00 PM

Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit Andrea; I think a lot of us females have to watch out for closet avalanches lol!~Che :)

Constance La France

Date: 4/2/2017 4:45:00 PM

Cheryl congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju it reminds me of my closet

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 4/2/2017 7:34:00 PM

Thanks so much for placing me as one of the winners BW; a very nice surprise!~Che:)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/20/2017 11:07:00 PM

Hi Cheryl, I'm not that familiar with this form. I think you did good. I must say I'm well acquainted with the "scene" you created with words:-) Alexis

Cheryl Hoffman
Date: 3/20/2017 11:17:00 PM

Lol, watch out for clothes "avalanche!" Thanks for very kind comment and visit Alexis!~Che :)