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Jumble of Puppies

Little legs t r i p and f u m b l e, bodies lay in a j u m b l e. Silly pups are full of play, roly poly all the day 3/21/17 qijue/jumble For Broken Wings Form J - Jueju contest

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Sushma A. Singh

Date: 4/13/2017 8:26:00 PM

Very cute and endearing write so deserving of high placement. Congrats on fine win , Kim !

Paul Callus

Date: 4/3/2017 4:03:00 PM

What a sweet, adorable image you portray, Kim! Baby animals are always a delight to watch. ~ Congratulations on this merited win. Regards // paul

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/10/2017 9:32:00 PM

Thank you, Paul!

James Inman

Date: 4/2/2017 9:44:00 PM

Really cute Kim.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/10/2017 9:32:00 PM

Thank you, James!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 7:47:00 PM

Yay for your great win, Kim. BIG congrats.

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/10/2017 9:32:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Constance La France

Date: 4/2/2017 4:31:00 PM

Kim congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju as an animal lover I really liked this ~

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/10/2017 9:31:00 PM

Thank you for my placement, Constance! Greatly appreciated.

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2017 3:47:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Kim

Kim Merryman
Date: 4/10/2017 9:30:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/26/2017 1:08:00 AM

Not silly but jolly. Wish you best for contest

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/29/2017 9:54:00 PM

Thank you, Anisha!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/25/2017 10:00:00 PM

Can just imagine the whole puppy scene Kim; your playful puppy poem made me smile~good luck in the contest~Che :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/29/2017 9:54:00 PM

Thank you, Cheryl! I'm glad I could make you smile.

Joseph May

Date: 3/23/2017 6:28:00 PM

Wonderful Jueju Kim..GL in the contest

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/29/2017 9:53:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2017 3:24:00 PM

very cute making your jumble be one of puppies!!!

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/22/2017 10:37:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Barry Stebbings

Date: 3/21/2017 2:11:00 PM

Lovely description of puppy play, KIm. Good luck in the contest. // Barry

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/22/2017 10:36:00 PM

Thank you, Barry!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/21/2017 1:40:00 PM

this is just adorable, kim!

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/22/2017 10:34:00 PM

Thank you, Ilene!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/21/2017 12:09:00 PM

absolutely gorgeous rhymes Kim I can picture it so clearly :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/22/2017 10:34:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Tim Smith

Date: 3/21/2017 11:52:00 AM

Very cute...I can picture the silly pups

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/22/2017 10:34:00 PM

Thank you, Tim!

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/21/2017 11:42:00 AM

Awww!! Kim this is adorable:) best wishes for the contest!! Big Hugggs deb

Kim Merryman
Date: 3/22/2017 10:33:00 PM

Thank you, Deborah!