Kim Merryman Poet Jueju

Jumble of Puppies

Little legs t r i p and f u m b l e,

bodies lay in a j u m b l e.

Silly pups are full of play,

roly poly all the day
                                                              
                                       
3/21/17
qijue/jumble
For Broken Wings Form J - Jueju contest

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Sushma A. Singh April 13, 2017 at 8:26 PM Very cute and endearing write so deserving of high placement. Congrats on fine win , Kim !

Paul Callus April 3, 2017 at 4:03 PM What a sweet, adorable image you portray, Kim! Baby animals are always a delight to watch. ~ Congratulations on this merited win. Regards // paul Kim Merryman April 10, 2017 at 9:32 PM Thank you, Paul!

James Inman April 2, 2017 at 9:44 PM Really cute Kim. Kim Merryman April 10, 2017 at 9:32 PM Thank you, James!

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 7:47 PM Yay for your great win, Kim. BIG congrats. Kim Merryman April 10, 2017 at 9:32 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Constance La France April 2, 2017 at 4:31 PM Kim congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju as an animal lover I really liked this ~ Kim Merryman April 10, 2017 at 9:31 PM Thank you for my placement, Constance! Greatly appreciated.

Joseph May March 31, 2017 at 3:47 PM Congrats on a fine win Kim Kim Merryman April 10, 2017 at 9:30 PM Thank you, Joseph!

Anisha Dutta March 26, 2017 at 1:08 AM Not silly but jolly. Wish you best for contest Kim Merryman March 29, 2017 at 9:54 PM Thank you, Anisha!

Cheryl Hoffman March 25, 2017 at 10:00 PM Can just imagine the whole puppy scene Kim; your playful puppy poem made me smile~good luck in the contest~Che :) Kim Merryman March 29, 2017 at 9:54 PM Thank you, Cheryl! I'm glad I could make you smile.

Joseph May March 23, 2017 at 6:28 PM Wonderful Jueju Kim..GL in the contest Kim Merryman March 29, 2017 at 9:53 PM Thank you, Joseph!

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2017 at 3:24 PM very cute making your jumble be one of puppies!!! Kim Merryman March 22, 2017 at 10:37 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Barry Stebbings March 21, 2017 at 2:11 PM Lovely description of puppy play, KIm. Good luck in the contest. // Barry Kim Merryman March 22, 2017 at 10:36 PM Thank you, Barry!

Ilene Bauer March 21, 2017 at 1:40 PM this is just adorable, kim! Kim Merryman March 22, 2017 at 10:34 PM Thank you, Ilene!

Jan Allison March 21, 2017 at 12:09 PM absolutely gorgeous rhymes Kim I can picture it so clearly :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Merryman March 22, 2017 at 10:34 PM Thank you, Jan!

Tim Smith March 21, 2017 at 11:52 AM Very cute...I can picture the silly pups Kim Merryman March 22, 2017 at 10:34 PM Thank you, Tim!

Deborah Burch March 21, 2017 at 11:42 AM Awww!! Kim this is adorable:) best wishes for the contest!! Big Hugggs deb Kim Merryman March 22, 2017 at 10:33 PM Thank you, Deborah!