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The ocean warms my freshly covered feet enjoying picnics and barbecues cutting grass and drinking water view joy peaceful tasty treats solstice comes without sound where peach trees abound no clouds in sight sailed gulls flight nimble white.

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/1/2023 6:16:00 PM

Dear Lasaad, your poetic pen paints beautiful July imagery with finesse. I especially enjoyed "solstice comes without sound" - simply splendid! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2023 1:40:00 PM

Congratulations on this winner in the contest. Way to go. Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/28/2023 5:32:00 PM

A delightful picture of July, Sotto! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2023 11:02:00 AM

Nice images of summer and I enjoyed the rhymes I saw as well. Congrats to you

Valsa George

Date: 7/8/2023 9:30:00 AM

So enjoyable it seems is your stroll through the sandy beach kissed by the summer sun. I see gulls flying over your head. Lovely poem, soothing and pleasant .

Bill Baker

Date: 7/7/2023 3:40:00 PM

Nice summer treats, my friend. An a fine Etheree poem. I like the photo of the hummingbird feeding on a Hibiscus like the ones in our front and back yards. Enjoy your summer treats. Bill

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/7/2023 12:21:00 PM

Very evocative of summer at the beach, love your closing lines too~

Jay Narain

Date: 7/6/2023 12:15:00 PM

Picturesque July in verses. Beautiful.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/5/2023 10:57:00 PM

A fine Etheree, Sotto. Picnics are fun. An admirable poem.