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July Treats

 The ocean warms my freshly covered feet
enjoying picnics and barbecues
cutting grass and drinking water
view joy peaceful tasty treats
solstice comes without sound
where peach trees abound
no clouds in sight
sailed gulls flight
nimble
white.

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Susan Ashley Date: 8/1/2023 6:16:00 PM Dear Lasaad, your poetic pen paints beautiful July imagery with finesse. I especially enjoyed "solstice comes without sound" - simply splendid! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/1/2023 1:40:00 PM Congratulations on this winner in the contest. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 7/28/2023 5:32:00 PM A delightful picture of July, Sotto! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/28/2023 11:02:00 AM Nice images of summer and I enjoyed the rhymes I saw as well. Congrats to you Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 7/8/2023 9:30:00 AM So enjoyable it seems is your stroll through the sandy beach kissed by the summer sun. I see gulls flying over your head. Lovely poem, soothing and pleasant . Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 7/7/2023 3:40:00 PM Nice summer treats, my friend. An a fine Etheree poem. I like the photo of the hummingbird feeding on a Hibiscus like the ones in our front and back yards. Enjoy your summer treats. Bill Login to Reply

Michelle Faulkner Date: 7/7/2023 12:21:00 PM Very evocative of summer at the beach, love your closing lines too~ Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 7/6/2023 12:15:00 PM Picturesque July in verses. Beautiful. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/5/2023 10:57:00 PM A fine Etheree, Sotto. Picnics are fun. An admirable poem. Login to Reply