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July Treats

The ocean warms my freshly covered feet enjoying picnics and barbecues cutting grass and drinking water view joy peaceful tasty treats solstice comes without sound where peach trees abound no clouds in sight sailed gulls flight nimble white.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 6:16 PM
Dear Lasaad, your poetic pen paints beautiful July imagery with finesse. I especially enjoyed "solstice comes without sound" - simply splendid! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations on this winner in the contest. Way to go. Sara
Merryman Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 5:32 PM
A delightful picture of July, Sotto! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Nice images of summer and I enjoyed the rhymes I saw as well. Congrats to you
George Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 9:30 AM
So enjoyable it seems is your stroll through the sandy beach kissed by the summer sun. I see gulls flying over your head. Lovely poem, soothing and pleasant .
Baker Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 3:40 PM
Nice summer treats, my friend. An a fine Etheree poem. I like the photo of the hummingbird feeding on a Hibiscus like the ones in our front and back yards. Enjoy your summer treats. Bill
Faulkner Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 12:21 PM
Very evocative of summer at the beach, love your closing lines too~
Narain Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Picturesque July in verses. Beautiful.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 10:57 PM
A fine Etheree, Sotto. Picnics are fun. An admirable poem.
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