Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Triolet

July Sky

Creamsicle sky melts in July       
and drips down on our souls renewed.
From midsummer’s unstifled sigh,
creamsicle sky melts in July. 
Our tent keeps secrets, we imply.
A fire sparks a sultry mood.
Creamsicle sky melts in July
and drips down on our souls renewed!


For Andrea's One Lovely Summer Triolet Contest
Visual #7, 5/28/15

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Kim Merryman June 13, 2015 at 9:05 PM A lovely, romantic write, Rhonda! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Sandra Haight June 13, 2015 at 8:33 PM Awesome imagery, Rhonda! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Skat A June 13, 2015 at 6:29 PM RHONDA, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:41 AM Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2015 at 1:03 AM Rhonda, you managed to sneak past my eagle eye. I thought i had eliminated all the poems that did not put the visual number right next to the poem title. (hope you don't mind I mentioned it at my blog; I don't want people to think I am playing favorites. This was truly a remarkable poem. probably the coolest imagery used by anybody! Creamsicle sky!!! Congrats.

Bl Devnath May 31, 2015 at 11:37 AM Beautiful poem started with a beautiful line. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Monterey Sirak May 31, 2015 at 8:06 AM A little sultry, a little romantic. Love the image of a creamsicle sky!

Arthur Vaso May 30, 2015 at 11:16 PM Oh la la , now I can blame you for my naughty thoughts!!!!! LOL kidding!

Kp Nunez May 30, 2015 at 11:13 PM A delightful read, Rhonda. Loved this! Blessings for the contest. Kim

Arthur Vaso May 29, 2015 at 7:32 PM I loved this, even though me being me I read a naughty side into it!!!! Rhonda Johnson-Saunders May 30, 2015 at 11:07 PM Thanks for the visit, Arthur...you're right on! I was intending to be a little naughty. I original wrote "bodies, nude" but decided to be subtle with "our souls renewed" instead.

Constance La France May 29, 2015 at 8:24 AM Rhonda, so pretty and perfectly penned, an awesome 7 and thanks for visiting my cloud poem, it is finished now

John Lawless May 29, 2015 at 7:57 AM ...And then night falls and all those noises start....AAhhh camping....Nicely done triolet...haven't had a creamsicle from the ice cream truck in a long time....

Casarah Nance May 29, 2015 at 7:09 AM It's getting hot in here! Nicely done!

Ilene Bauer May 28, 2015 at 5:11 PM i love the "creamsicle sky," rhonda! good luck in the contest...

Skat A May 28, 2015 at 1:50 PM good lukc in contest

Jan Allison May 28, 2015 at 11:46 AM Absolutely beautiful imagery Rhonda - good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian May 28, 2015 at 11:21 AM Dreamy, sweet and serene. Loved this, Rhonda. I really loved the creamsicle bit. Good luck, sweetie. Hugs

Anna Hopper May 28, 2015 at 9:09 AM Excellent! I love this exquisite poem! Adding to my favorites! A cold hard 7!