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July Sky

Creamsicle sky melts in July and drips down on our souls renewed. From midsummer’s unstifled sigh, creamsicle sky melts in July. Our tent keeps secrets, we imply. A fire sparks a sultry mood. Creamsicle sky melts in July and drips down on our souls renewed! For Andrea's One Lovely Summer Triolet Contest Visual #7, 5/28/15

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/13/2015 9:05:00 PM

A lovely, romantic write, Rhonda! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/13/2015 8:33:00 PM

Awesome imagery, Rhonda! Congratulations on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 6:29:00 PM

RHONDA, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2015 5:41:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2015 1:03:00 AM

Rhonda, you managed to sneak past my eagle eye. I thought i had eliminated all the poems that did not put the visual number right next to the poem title. (hope you don't mind I mentioned it at my blog; I don't want people to think I am playing favorites. This was truly a remarkable poem. probably the coolest imagery used by anybody! Creamsicle sky!!! Congrats.

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/31/2015 11:37:00 AM

Beautiful poem started with a beautiful line. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/31/2015 8:06:00 AM

A little sultry, a little romantic. Love the image of a creamsicle sky!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/30/2015 11:16:00 PM

Oh la la , now I can blame you for my naughty thoughts!!!!! LOL kidding!

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/30/2015 11:13:00 PM

A delightful read, Rhonda. Loved this! Blessings for the contest. Kim

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/29/2015 7:32:00 PM

I loved this, even though me being me I read a naughty side into it!!!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 5/30/2015 11:07:00 PM

Thanks for the visit, Arthur...you're right on! I was intending to be a little naughty. I original wrote "bodies, nude" but decided to be subtle with "our souls renewed" instead.

Constance La France

Date: 5/29/2015 8:24:00 AM

Rhonda, so pretty and perfectly penned, an awesome 7 and thanks for visiting my cloud poem, it is finished now

John Lawless

Date: 5/29/2015 7:57:00 AM

...And then night falls and all those noises start....AAhhh camping....Nicely done triolet...haven't had a creamsicle from the ice cream truck in a long time....