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July Sky

a distant rumble billows on the horizon a shriek of yellow ©7/3/2022 The Sky in July Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/18/2022 4:49:00 PM

Congratulation on the win. You summed it up well in 5-7-5. Nice!

Date: 7/18/2022 10:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Lovely" Haiku write. Have a great/blessed day.......................

Date: 7/18/2022 6:45:00 AM

Congrats with your wonderful haiku. God bless you. Love, Gina

Date: 7/18/2022 6:20:00 AM

This is flawless John. A true winner! I've made a fav of this shriek of yellow. Congratulations! Linda

Date: 7/17/2022 7:49:00 PM

Congratulations John Lawless! First Place!

Date: 7/17/2022 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest! Short and powerful! :)Paulette

John Lawless
Date: 7/17/2022 3:45:00 PM

Thanks Paulette. I always keep Basso's frog in mind when I write Haiku

Date: 7/17/2022 10:42:00 AM

sure do love the shriek of yellow. This is how haiku is done. Congrats. I had too many great poems this time to limit my first placements!

John Lawless
Date: 7/17/2022 3:44:00 PM

Andrea, any placement in one of your contest is always an honor. Thanks for the topic

Date: 7/3/2022 10:42:00 AM

Great imagery, John. Good luck in the contest.

John Lawless
Date: 7/17/2022 3:44:00 PM

Hey, Jim, seems luck was with me

Date: 7/3/2022 5:19:00 AM

I like it!