Juliet Speaks

Again , she pines on barren stars and clasps the handrail of despair, maiden of night, gazing afar Juliet speaks to feeble air . Oh, hours trickle on beats quite piled, that mock a future then decide unmoved, her pulse begins to roam of fevered thoughts on walls, alone. With ebon clouds that float midway she ponders, restless as a breeze, compelled to seek this dream-like play that waits for lovers' melodies. Yet tresses blow without relief, for love denied like winter thief as silence drapes the skyline’s veil on empty porch howling farewell. Contest: Destiny or Choices For Nayda Ivette Negron Resubmitted 4/19/2016
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April 28, 2016 at 12:13 AM
Nette, well done on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
Kimathi Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 5:00 AM
I love the rhythm and flow of your verses!!! Congrats, Nette, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
Lawless Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 6:26 PM
Sounds like she got over Romeo this time. Wonderfully smooth and easy to read with a spellbinding cadence. Congrats on your placement in the contest
Devnath  Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Congrats on your awesome win my lovely frind. Loved always, bl
Raven Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 3:16 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I always Love how your poetry always seems to have such a gentle easy flow. It amazes me, the amounts of emotion you manage to convey through your words. The images stay for a long time. This is a definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
Rycroft Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 3:10 PM
Congrats well done xxxxx
Negron Flores Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest
Sirak Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 7:46 AM
From 'handrail of despair to empty porch howling' it is amazing. You captured the feelings of unrequited love in your unique beautiful language.
Tacito Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 10:27 PM
Absolutely stunning. Such a questioning of heart, its purpose, & its reasons...incredible job.
Devnath  Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 10:36 AM
Nice feeling about love and beautifully worded "love denied like winter thief......farewell." Excellent work. Loved always, my friend, bl
Jones Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 9:54 PM
I think you are some ancient great poet reborn in these modern times...just for our pleasure..:-) :-) :-) to make us feel special reading your words....ahhhhh
Watson Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 2:28 PM
See how she leans her cheek upon her hand. O that I were a glove upon that hand, That I might touch that cheek.. Delightful as always nette.
Hamilton Avatar
February 17, 2014 at 7:53 AM
excellent pen Nette gl dear in contest hugs
Sivey Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 11:54 PM
I really enjoyed reading you last stanza and especially the line, "for love denied like winter thief" that is an impressive line here my friend! What a glorious poem here, you have such a wonderful write that I have read this evening! Great Work!!
May Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 4:22 PM
Beautiful write ....best wishes in the contest
Carrillo Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 1:05 PM
This is very touching and heartfelt. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
Mara Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 12:32 PM
Heart-stirring poem wich underscores a longing " denied like winter thief". Worth bookmarking, Nette!
Williams Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 11:58 AM
Nette, an excellent take on the theme...David
Bolton Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 10:13 AM
Ahhh . . . Such is the purity of heart of sweet Juliet, and that same purity flows from your pen. A moving, descriptive poem, very, very well done.
Andresen Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 8:52 AM
- Thanks Nette ......... always beautifully written - although... I become often touched by your thoughts. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mohammed Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 7:14 AM
This is a wow for me Nette. Impeccable rhyme quality and captivating imagery. This should do well in the contest. My hands has just pressed the fav. button....smile!
Kayode Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 7:00 AM
A super Rispetto nette,great work as usual.Kudos.
Enriquez Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 6:15 AM
Dear Nette: Simply beautiful. A very fine work. Thanks. Leon
Palli Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 4:50 AM
Good Job and good luck in Contest
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