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Juliet Speaks

Again , she pines on barren stars and clasps the handrail of despair, maiden of night, gazing afar Juliet speaks to feeble air . Oh, hours trickle on beats quite piled, that mock a future then decide unmoved, her pulse begins to roam of fevered thoughts on walls, alone. With ebon clouds that float midway she ponders, restless as a breeze, compelled to seek this dream-like play that waits for lovers' melodies. Yet tresses blow without relief, for love denied like winter thief as silence drapes the skyline’s veil on empty porch howling farewell. Contest: Destiny or Choices For Nayda Ivette Negron Resubmitted 4/19/2016

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:13:00 AM
Nette, well done on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/26/2016 5:00:00 AM
I love the rhythm and flow of your verses!!! Congrats, Nette, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/20/2016 6:26:00 PM
Sounds like she got over Romeo this time. Wonderfully smooth and easy to read with a spellbinding cadence. Congrats on your placement in the contest
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Date: 4/20/2016 3:17:00 PM
Congrats on your awesome win my lovely frind. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/19/2016 3:16:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I always Love how your poetry always seems to have such a gentle easy flow. It amazes me, the amounts of emotion you manage to convey through your words. The images stay for a long time. This is a definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 4/19/2016 3:10:00 PM
Congrats well done xxxxx
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Date: 4/19/2016 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the contest
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Date: 2/21/2014 7:46:00 AM
From 'handrail of despair to empty porch howling' it is amazing. You captured the feelings of unrequited love in your unique beautiful language.
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Date: 2/19/2014 10:27:00 PM
Absolutely stunning. Such a questioning of heart, its purpose, & its reasons...incredible job.
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Date: 2/19/2014 10:36:00 AM
Nice feeling about love and beautifully worded "love denied like winter thief......farewell." Excellent work. Loved always, my friend, bl
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Date: 2/18/2014 9:54:00 PM
I think you are some ancient great poet reborn in these modern times...just for our pleasure..:-) :-) :-) to make us feel special reading your words....ahhhhh
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Date: 2/17/2014 2:28:00 PM
See how she leans her cheek upon her hand. O that I were a glove upon that hand, That I might touch that cheek.. Delightful as always nette.
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Date: 2/17/2014 7:53:00 AM
excellent pen Nette gl dear in contest hugs
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Date: 2/16/2014 11:54:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading you last stanza and especially the line, "for love denied like winter thief" that is an impressive line here my friend! What a glorious poem here, you have such a wonderful write that I have read this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/16/2014 4:22:00 PM
Beautiful write ....best wishes in the contest
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Date: 2/16/2014 1:05:00 PM
This is very touching and heartfelt. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 2/16/2014 12:32:00 PM
Heart-stirring poem wich underscores a longing " denied like winter thief". Worth bookmarking, Nette!
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Date: 2/16/2014 11:58:00 AM
Nette, an excellent take on the theme...David
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Date: 2/16/2014 10:13:00 AM
Ahhh . . . Such is the purity of heart of sweet Juliet, and that same purity flows from your pen. A moving, descriptive poem, very, very well done.
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Date: 2/16/2014 8:52:00 AM
- Thanks Nette ......... always beautifully written - although... I become often touched by your thoughts. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/16/2014 7:14:00 AM
This is a wow for me Nette. Impeccable rhyme quality and captivating imagery. This should do well in the contest. My hands has just pressed the fav. button....smile!
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Date: 2/16/2014 7:00:00 AM
A super Rispetto nette,great work as usual.Kudos.
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Date: 2/16/2014 6:15:00 AM
Dear Nette: Simply beautiful. A very fine work. Thanks. Leon
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Date: 2/16/2014 4:50:00 AM
Good Job and good luck in Contest
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