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Juliet

Night of fitful dreaming, I have slept ill In torturous musings of manic frame Mindful of Juliet my thoughts did fill The only drawback is Capulet name Two warring families in conflict remain As my name is Romeo Montague Rival animosity just grew and grew Arose and once attired I ventured forth Now in pursuit haste I on winged feet Today Juliet to chapel will go From afar to espy her makes heart replete Hopefully with Juliet I shall greet Oh, I see her kneeling in silent prayer Her mesmerising beauty compels my stare She draws near, shrouded in an embroidered shawl Downcasting her eyes to the chapel floor Then momentarily they on me fall Catching my breath as she leaves through the door Making my heart fill with love evermore How I wish to call her my own sweet love In hope I look to the Heavens above Undetected, I followed her home As her inspiring glance lighted my way But at her closed gates I let out a groan Wondering how to gain entry, who can say Tomorrow's no use it has to be today So impatiently I rattle the latch And lo and behold it is on the catch Impenetrable thickets edge the path Hidden I must reconnitre my way Someone comes walking and I hear a laugh It's Juliet strolling and out at play Enjoying the warm weather this month of May A silken ball of blue thrown overhead In catching it my concealment is shed "Are you alone?" I bravely whispered low Smiling in conspiracy she spoke "Wait, I shall ask my nurse to go below, to check my meals on menu slate" Returning she and I pledged our fate So from now onwards we as one shall be Our lives will be happy we both agree.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/26/2014 9:54:00 PM
Theresa, love the win ,. Congratulations:) goodnight ~SKAT~
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 2/27/2014 3:12:00 AM
Hi Skat, Thank you for your lovely comments. Much appreciated. Regards, Theresa x
Date: 2/25/2014 4:40:00 PM
Thanks for thinking about me in such a seductive manner. ; ) Congrats, Theresa!
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 2/27/2014 3:18:00 AM
Hi Juliet, I was inspired! I am grateful to receive your positive comments. Thank you for reading it and taking the time to make contact. Regards Theresa x
Date: 2/18/2014 1:13:00 PM
great poem Theresa congrats on win hugs
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 2/18/2014 1:19:00 PM
Hi Shadow, Thank you. Good of you to contact me again with your positive comment. A big hug back to also. Much appreciated, Theresa xx.
Date: 2/18/2014 9:04:00 AM
Excellent retelling! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 2/18/2014 11:47:00 AM
Hi Debbie, Thank you. I was so surprised to receive the notification. I am also eagerly reading the other entries as well. I am so pleased you liked it. Light and love to you too. Regards Theresa x
Date: 2/18/2014 5:45:00 AM
Enjoyed the write on Juliet and congrats on the win, theresa
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 2/18/2014 8:32:00 AM
Hi Ram, I am very grateful for your positive comments, as always. Regards Theresa x
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 2/18/2014 8:31:00 AM
Date: 2/17/2014 9:47:00 PM
Excellent narration. Great win. I confess that I had not before read a Rhyme Royal. I very much enjoyed yours. Grats! Chris
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 2/18/2014 8:35:00 AM
Hi Christopher. Thank you for your very kind comments. It was a challenge but I enjoyed constructing it. I'm glad you liked reading it. Regards, Theresa x
Date: 2/17/2014 5:28:00 PM
Extremely good for your first rhyme royal! Congrats on your 2d place as well! This poem contains a realistic and compelling story, exactly what I was looking for. Great job!
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 2/20/2014 10:33:00 AM
My pleasure. I am so very pleased that you are enjoying yourself.
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 2/18/2014 8:29:00 AM
Hi Isaiah, Wow, I can't believe it has been placed so highly in your competition. I like the challenge of writing. I need inspiration to write in the first place. I am a historical lover and I thank you for giving me the opportunity to write on this intriguing subject. I am bowled over by your positive critique. Regards, Theresa xx
Date: 1/30/2014 12:29:00 PM
I've just posted my first rhyme royal piece, when I noticed yours..I found your poem very appealing and see I have a ways to go with this form
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 2/1/2014 4:21:00 AM
Hi, This is also my first rhyme royal piece, until I joined this site I was unaware of so many poetic forms of styles. Mind blowing to say the least. It was kind of you to post your lovely comments. Thank you. Theresa xx

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