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I hold three magic rocks in my hand rolling them over and over and over leaving this reality behind, far behind dreams begin, I seek the farthest hill wrapped in clouds, surrounded by eagles seeking to reach the sea on the wings of imagination...it's there I'll find Juliana the face of beauty in my dreams waiting on the shore, her back to the horizon searching her fantasy world of perpetual sunrise and rainbows where butterflies float on sea air above her voice calling to me on haunting winds across snow-covered mountains with my wings, I fly above the clouds to reach the sea, where Juliana patiently waits her arms outstretched to hold me captive promising warm sensations of welcome the light in her eyes will draw me in and we'll melt into each other's arms so the world can bloom as we dance beneath the rising sun her sheer dress wrapping around us as we spin into a blissful kiss allowing waves to caress our feet dancing in the sand creating a memory to hold that seems real I reach out as Juliana begins to vanish her outstretched arms the last vision seen she never said goodbye, and neither did my heart when my eyes opened, Juliana was gone and the three magic rocks were still in my hand tomorrow, I'll watch the sunrise and dream of Juliana

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Date: 2/26/2025 6:14:00 AM
Oh yes, a romantic poem full of yearning and love language. Congratulations i enjoyed reading this today! Xo
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Date: 2/15/2025 8:51:00 AM
Frederic, dear friend, dear poet, what captivating power lies within the alluring, bittersweet beauty of your verse. Your tender, vivid imagery brings me to the center of this dream where Juliana vanishes from the scene like sand through fingers. The musical accompaniment, with it's enchanting lilt is perfect for the poignant ambience of your wistful poem. Amazing, my dear friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/16/2025 8:22:00 AM
Susan, dear friend, dear poet, I am honored by the kindness of your words. Sand through fingers, wished I had thought of that when writing. The enchantment is mine from your gracious words. Thank you, dear friend...Frederic
Date: 2/14/2025 5:01:00 PM
This is haunting - sometimes we look and see the face we cannot let go.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/16/2025 8:24:00 AM
thank you Paige for your kindness and yes there is always one face that never leaves
Date: 2/13/2025 12:44:00 PM
Beautifully written fantasy Froidrick
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Frederic Parker
Date: 2/16/2025 8:24:00 AM
thanks, Tom-me

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