Juju

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vast is my world much larger is my heart
thanks to your sister, your brother, and you
I feel lifted, I am ready to start
what I hope and pray lasts an hour or two
you called this morning to insist I rise
my lovely child the middle one of three
sleep has gone, some lingering in my eyes
the care in your voice so soothing to me
yes there are tasks you and I must perform
the years and challenges of life abound
still I reflect on the day you were born
you were welcome then, you are welcome now
promise this ritual will never end
a daughter, a father the best of friends
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 6/18/2023 10:16:00 PM
A lovely poem , a great connection! I cried .
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Ricky Muse
Date: 6/19/2023 5:34:00 AM
Oh no Camila. I'm sorry. I can talk with my middle child for hours. My other two kids not so long. Love them all. Thank you for your thoughts.................peace!
Date: 1/3/2023 10:33:00 AM
Dear Ricky, it has been a while since I've immersed myself in your soulful voice and poetry, and it feels so good to visit and read/hear your exceptional poem today.. Indeed, children do grow our hearts! I adore the strength of love conveyed in every line and the appreciation expressed for this precious gift of love, "a daughter, a father the best of friends" - such a grand finale to an exquisite piece full of emotion. By the way, my second child's name is Julianna and her nickname is JuJu too! :)) I see you've not posted in a while, and your poetic presence is missed, my friend. I hope all is well with you and yours. Warmest wishes for a healthy and happy new year! ~Susan
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Ricky Muse
Date: 4/23/2023 12:13:00 PM
Susan please forgive me. I'm recently retired and trying to get settled. Thank U for your kindness I truly appreciate it. We have two things in common; poetry and JuJu. Be safe, be blessed...................peace!
Date: 3/7/2021 1:42:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your verses; it's similar to looking into a nice stream of actions with fantastic imagery. Great poem, Ricky. We have the same writing tendency; please look at my page and give me some feedback. Thanks
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Ricky Muse
Date: 5/3/2021 4:14:00 PM
Thank you for your input my friend. Be safe and be blessed.
Date: 1/25/2021 1:50:00 PM
this is so precious!! I see it's also a winner. COngrats!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 1/25/2021 9:52:00 PM
Andrea that middle child is something else. Thanks for stopping bye..............peace!
Date: 1/23/2021 8:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Ricky!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 1/24/2021 4:31:00 PM
Thanks Mark.
Date: 1/23/2021 12:02:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in the Carolyn Devonshire contest, Ricky :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Ricky Muse
Date: 1/23/2021 4:12:00 PM
Thank you SS. Be safe and be blessed.
Date: 1/22/2021 4:54:00 AM
It's wonderful that you have such a strong relationship with your daughter, Ricky. The message and rhyme are very good. Sonnet meter is off a bit. Congrats on your place in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Ricky Muse
Date: 1/23/2021 4:11:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn. When I shared this poem with my daughter she smiled in a way I've never seen her smile before. Thanks again.................peace!
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