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ripe red raspberries remind me of pert nipples do other folk agree 10/1/18

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Date: 10/2/2018 8:10:00 PM
Haha, I will never look at rasberries the same again. John
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Date: 10/3/2018 4:54:00 PM
I think that seems to be the general opinion with all the comments ... I wonder if the sale of raspberries will go up now! lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/2/2018 9:33:00 AM
...so now I gotta go put some raspberries in a wet T-shirt....damn you Jan!!!!!
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Date: 10/3/2018 4:53:00 PM
ha ha ha John that comment is priceless!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/2/2018 7:27:00 AM
Had never thought of that...now I can't stop thinking about it... thanks lol
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Date: 10/2/2018 7:37:00 AM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2018 6:46:00 PM
I can see why you would think that Jan. I prefer black berries, my daughter grows them! Lol. : ) Sweet!
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Date: 10/2/2018 7:37:00 AM
I much prefer raspberries I think they are my favourite summer fruit:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2018 6:07:00 PM
hahaha. Some do probably look that way!!
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Date: 10/1/2018 6:31:00 PM
glad you agree lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2018 5:06:00 PM
LOL cute!!!
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Date: 10/1/2018 5:17:00 PM
Thanks!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2018 3:07:00 PM
Why limit your Berries Jan but yes I agree xxoo A pert little poem! Happy Monday!
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Date: 10/1/2018 3:36:00 PM
ha ha ha love that comment Mike:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2018 12:13:00 PM
No; pert nipples just inspire me to give them a good licking! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/1/2018 1:18:00 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2018 11:44:00 AM
Haha Jan I've now seen these in a new light. I'll be thinking of this next time I eat them. Tom
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:49:00 AM
lol Tom I bet you will be begging your wife to buy them from the supermarket lol - i grow them in my garden lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 10/1/2018 11:04:00 AM
Boysenberries too! ;p
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Date: 10/1/2018 11:07:00 AM
lol Mo yes them too, gonna start a berry revolution lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/1/2018 10:35:00 AM
LOL....LOL! A guy reading this with a tipped chair, just might fall off, sweet Jan!
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:41:00 AM
I went into my garden to pick some to go with my cereal and the thought came to me lol:-) hugs jan xx

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