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Juggernaut

Not the crush But the GOD JUGGERNAUT! Racing hidden above a naked earth Power roiling deep within For just a day or two wet smells Liberated soil Chlorophyll At intervals sense a BURST Guts of Juggernaut at work Don't now look into the sky Clouds have no lasting eternally Action boils down here HE's left a peaceful winter place Opened up green veins And saturates the mind of spring

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2010 10:19:00 PM

Quite unique, DAver! And from your recent comments to me, I take it you REALLY get into the Hallween season!! Luv, Andrea ps. Hey, I miss your emails!

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 5/9/2009 8:15:00 AM

Hi Daver... this is the most unusual and most descriptive rendition of spring.. I think I have ever read.... quality and class my friend ! kudos.

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/8/2009 12:06:00 AM

Yes, it's spring time again. Wonderfully penned my friend. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem to us. I have aslo a featured poem this week. Ernilando

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/6/2009 10:27:00 AM

The power and magic of spring are related brilliantly, Daver! Excellent work. Love, Carolyn

Tamra Amato

Date: 5/5/2009 5:06:00 PM

love, love, love it! bringing HIM closer and further away. He seems, mighty, fun, familiar, magical creator. I love your writing.

Laurie Ginn

Date: 5/4/2009 8:03:00 AM

Kisses to your forehead and a smack to da butt, anytime lovey

Diane Christian

Date: 5/4/2009 7:50:00 AM

a wonderful poem Daver thanks for your kind comments on my poetry god bless you always from diane

David Smalling

Date: 5/4/2009 4:17:00 AM

Daver, this is so textually rich ... and what a powerful insight you bring to this inspiration. Thanks for your comments, may you be ever blessed.

Corinne Curcio

Date: 5/3/2009 3:37:00 PM

To quote Lawrence Welk - "Wunerful Wunderful" - I love the whole thing, but the last line is perfection!

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/3/2009 9:59:00 AM

What images, Daver! Wow. I can see it like a movie, and it is a powerful image. good gravey, that last verse? Superb! bravo, my friend. love, Kristin

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/3/2009 6:06:00 AM

Wow! I read it twice once before and once after looking up JUGGERNAUT. (... a word not used much in America...but, it's a good word. Especially the way you have used it herein.) I like your slant on the forces of nature...subject to the God. Enioyed reading your poem this morning. Keep writing. Love, Dane

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/2/2009 3:04:00 PM

holy tomato! Daver! let's do cartwheels on the fresh-green grass, brother!!! love it!!! Jim

Laurie Ginn

Date: 5/2/2009 9:14:00 AM

You have the most amazing view points on life here on the planet. I love to see things from your perspective. By the by I did listen to whatever it was you told me to, (memory is not my strong suit) it was my dear intense. I shared it with a friend who liked it was well. Happy Saturday~

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/2/2009 6:48:00 AM

Wow is right it is a different view of spring! Wonderfully done too! I love your style! Laura :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/2/2009 6:15:00 AM

Wow...this is such a different spin on the essence of spring!! So creative....so powerful and clever....great work!! :) Your poems never fail to please! Love, Carrie