Juggernaut

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Veracious voices that come out to play,
Wandering words tell the tale…
Mending hearts in the mist.

Where secluded sacrifices submerge,
Whispers warming in their waves…
Sailing scriptural shores.

A man stands alone in the baneful breeze,
Watching the world decaying;
The juggling juggernaut.




This verse is inspired by & dedicated to, our brother poet Tommy (Son of Spock)...who is on hopefully, a short sabbatical...Live long and prosper SOS...lets show some love...



Nov.13.2019
Pick A Title, Vol 11 - 
Kimo(3 Stanzas)
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

Placed 1'st...Thank You

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/8/2020 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations .... Good poem. God bless you.
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Date: 12/9/2019 8:36:00 AM
Congrats my friend on your win. Bravo.
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Date: 12/9/2019 4:12:00 AM
Timely tribute to your friend, love the alliteration, congrats. A suggestion for salt and light - "watching as the world decays" for line 8 - the double "ing" trips the tongue a bit. Nonetheless, an excellent kimo.
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Date: 12/8/2019 8:52:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 12/8/2019 7:30:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem W.W.
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Date: 12/8/2019 6:51:00 PM
Congratulations for your 1st place win WW ! :)
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Date: 12/8/2019 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win :) hugs
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Date: 11/18/2019 3:35:00 PM
Good one, and as for son of Spock, he is always somewhere around here. I don't think his sabbatical is all that serious! He is pretty cool dude!
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Date: 11/18/2019 7:21:00 AM
Such a supernova cool poem, WW! Man, you're just too good at being so alliterative awesome. GrEaT Kimo therapy ... I'm felling holistically better already. Lol! Keep the creative juice flowing, my dear friend. Live long and prosper. Outstanding poetry per usual from your talented Silver Surfer quill plank. Love and peace forever.
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Date: 11/16/2019 8:43:00 AM
such a wonderful tribute to SOS...brilliantly penned Kimo, i expect this one to do well... :)
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Date: 11/15/2019 1:13:00 PM
I am certain that SOS will be moved by your tribute - he does write beautifully - a very apt poem. Well penned 'Wingster' Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/15/2019 12:05:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to a fellow super. Great lines. Hugs
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Date: 11/15/2019 5:52:00 AM
Hi WW, Good poem and dedication to Tom. It was nice of you to write such a write . You rock bro! Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/13/2019 12:52:00 PM
Cool kimo for a really cool dude!! Hope he finds his way back soon ~ Good luck in the contest, ^WW^ :)
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Date: 11/13/2019 10:15:00 AM
Really enjoyed this one WW, nice tribute to Tom, sailing scriptural shores...great line and apropos! Live long and prosper!
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Date: 11/13/2019 9:23:00 AM
Love this and your tribute to Tommy! You are always the king of alliteration!
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Date: 11/13/2019 8:56:00 AM
Really, really cool my friend. This one was definitely an affecting piece of writing. Well written.
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