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Judgement Overrides Jumbled - Not For Contest

Jumbled means in quite a mess Just like my mind in distress Jump says my brain at cliffs edge Judgement stalls this death I pledge* *Last line kindly supplied by Tim Smith Penned 20 March 2017

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Date: 3/21/2017 5:59:00 AM
Lol...It is real good
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2017 3:08:00 PM
your not biased are you rofl....Seren
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/21/2017 9:09:00 AM
Sure...It came from a few ideas
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/21/2017 8:31:00 AM
is it ok how I put the comment that you supplied last line

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