Judgement

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07/09/23

Jury delivers Unanimous verdict Defendant looks shaken Guilty on all counts Evidence was overwhelming Murder most horrid Early release is not an option Now she’ll be locked up for life Throw away the key!

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Constance La France

Date: 7/21/2023 10:05:00 AM

Jan, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge J Words !

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/13/2023 3:14:00 PM

Jan Jan Jan My Mam Judge you Yest you be judged yourself A damning judgement Of Judgement Itself So well eloquently put And pointed out You took the gloves off And put them on the Back foot Your judgement Just seemingly appears To me to be getting Clever and cleverer Clearer and clearer Your not only just funny You are so much more Hugs and blessings

Terrell Martin

Date: 7/11/2023 3:37:00 PM

I only recently began writing acrostics but with only one word per line. Thanks for sharing this excellent example of multiple words per line with a very sad story to tell. Well done!