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07/09/23

Judgement 

Jury delivers
Unanimous verdict
Defendant looks shaken
Guilty on all counts
Evidence was overwhelming
Murder most horrid
Early release is not an option
Now she’ll be locked up for life
Throw away the key!

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Constance La France
Date: 7/21/2023 10:05:00 AM
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Jan, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge J Words !
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 7/13/2023 3:14:00 PM
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Jan Jan Jan My Mam Judge you Yest you be judged yourself A damning judgement Of Judgement Itself So well eloquently put And pointed out You took the gloves off And put them on the Back foot Your judgement Just seemingly appears To me to be getting Clever and cleverer Clearer and clearer Your not only just funny You are so much more Hugs and blessings
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Terrell Martin
Date: 7/11/2023 3:37:00 PM
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I only recently began writing acrostics but with only one word per line. Thanks for sharing this excellent example of multiple words per line with a very sad story to tell. Well done!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/11/2023 2:26:00 PM
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- Back with a congratulations, Jan :) - hugs
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 7/11/2023 3:32:00 AM
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A very beautiful acrostic on judgment. Congratulations!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/10/2023 10:56:00 AM
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- Excellent, Jan ... throw away the key - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 7/10/2023 4:59:00 AM
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Jan, your acrostic sums it up perfectly!! Great idea! Good Luck!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2023 9:27:00 AM
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thanks Mike, got to say some sentences are ridiculous and it is no justice for the victim or families:-( hugs Jan x
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David Fisher
Date: 7/9/2023 5:14:00 PM
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Good One, Jan, guilty is as guilty does.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/10/2023 3:44:00 AM
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thanks david xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/9/2023 4:03:00 PM
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very cool way to the J
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2023 4:06:00 PM
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thanks Andrea i did another poem on jealousy but then this idea came to me. hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/9/2023 1:35:00 PM
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Murder! This is good incentive for me to get committing such a crime off of my mind. A good ‘J’ entry.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2023 2:38:00 PM
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thanks Lin, i did one on jealousy but will save that for another time lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 7/9/2023 1:30:00 PM
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an excellent acrostic, jan! good luck in the contest!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/9/2023 2:39:00 PM
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oh Ilene its always a joy to see you, you have been so supportive to me throughout my time on soup. hugs Jan xx
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