Joyfully Dancing

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                               .     .       I, dance    .       .
                               .      .  to the music .     .
                                        of    *     auburn
                                         summer   and    .
                                        luscious spring,       .
                                           to       the .  .    .
                                          enthralling
                                           sound   of
                                           bumble bees
                                             buzzing  past
                                               awestruck blossoms,
                                            thumping freedom
                                            encores     M  Y
                                           routine   waltz
                                           smiles      o    f
                                            LIFE     echoes
                                             IN          MY
                                            brave      and
                                             I..          keep
                                             danc        ing
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Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/7/2023 10:53:00 AM

Lasaad, your have so captivatingly expressed both your poem theme and a shape poem to match! Your shape articulates the words with eloquence in elegance. Congratulations on your win! Blessings my friend. Masterfully executed from the pen of a master poet.