Joyful Seagulls

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A squabble of white seagulls dance and twine with v-shaped wings aflutter in the breeze; above the ocean's whitecap-wave design, they greet the day with joyful calls that please. With v-shaped wings aflutter in the breeze, creating whirling patterns that unfold, they greet the day with joyful calls that please- squawks echoing- united, loud, and bold. Creating whirling patterns that unfold, they mesmerize with flutters of their wings- squawks echoing- united, loud, and bold, while hunting food amid their gatherings. They mesmerize with flutters of their wings above the ocean's whitecap-wave design, while hunting food amid their gatherings- a squabble of white seagulls dance and twine. December 9, 2019 ~2nd Place~ Contest: A Flock of Birds Sponsor: Julia Ward Judged: 10/07/2022 ~1st Place~ Contest: Seagulls Sponsor: Eve Roper Judged: 12/20/2019 ~3rd Place~ Contest: Your Best December Poem Sponsor: John Hamilton Judged: 12/26/2019 (a group of seagulls is called a squabble)

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