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Joyful Seagulls


A squabble of white seagulls dance and twine
   with v-shaped wings aflutter in the breeze;
      above the ocean's whitecap-wave design,
they greet the day with joyful calls that please.

With v-shaped wings aflutter in the breeze,
   creating whirling patterns that unfold,
      they greet the day with joyful calls that please-
squawks echoing- united, loud, and bold.

Creating whirling patterns that unfold,
   they mesmerize with flutters of their wings-
      squawks echoing- united, loud, and bold,
while hunting food amid their gatherings.

They mesmerize with flutters of their wings
   above the ocean's whitecap-wave design,
      while hunting food amid their gatherings-
a squabble of white seagulls dance and twine.


December 9, 2019

~2nd Place~
Contest: A Flock of Birds 
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Judged: 10/07/2022

~1st Place~
Contest: Seagulls
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Judged: 12/20/2019

~3rd Place~ 
Contest: Your Best December Poem
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Judged: 12/26/2019

(a group of seagulls is called a squabble)
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Miller Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 11:35 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine pantoum
Rodrigues Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on 2nd place win! That first line drew me right into the flight!
Haight Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 8:57 PM
Thank you, Kim, for your congrats and uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra
Fowler Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 11:50 AM
Congratulations on this great win Sandra. :) Linda
Haight Avatar
October 6, 2022 at 8:57 PM
Thank you very much, Linda! Sandra ;)
Chiri Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 5:21 PM
Sandra congrats on your win!;)
Haight Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:43 PM
Thank you, Brenda! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Hamilton Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 3:54 PM
A lovely write from your brilliant pen, congrats Sandra on another win!
Haight Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:43 PM
Thank you very much, John! I appreciate my placement. Sandra ;)
Na Avatar
December 20, 2019 at 2:04 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Sandra
Haight Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 6:42 PM
Thank you, Gregory! Sandra
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