Joyful

I went to a land of little
A place of lovely smiles
Candle sticks and butter cups
Clothes of many styles

She gazed at me
With crinkled eyes
She said “you’re just a boy”
“But, I”m all of sixty four”
“So what, embrace your joy.”

Tiny hands and tiny feet
Flowing yellow hair
She flew about as fairies do
I couldn’t believe that she was there

The path before me
Stones and grass
The air it smelt so sweet 
Butterflies with glowing eyes
Guided me to a seat

Animals and people too
Even Tiny tinker tots
Danced about with such glee
Amidst the Forget me nots

My problems shrunk to little
As I grew in joy
Sixty four’s just a number
After all, I'm just a boy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Scott Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 6:14 AM
Love the last line gives good sense of place
Loving Iii Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 4:49 PM
Some what dreamy. Makes me think of Older Women. Who can be attractive too. The situation must be real.
Godwin Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 7:48 AM
All lines titillate with perfect, crisp, snapping, get-the-reader's-poetry-blood-flowing, ideal brevity lines. You may have seen me getting high on a poem page here & there, well, now I've got a poetry adrenaline buzz right here, right now. 1 wee exception, 4 line, 3 stan - doesn't stand up to talent in other stanzas TO ME. One yesterday that was years ago, you suggested I switch 2 lines, and I was appreciative You were right; it read better. Truly love the poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Velasco Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 6:35 AM
This was pure magic, Richard. Such a beautiful reminder that joy knows no age, and wonder can still live in us no matter the number. The imagery felt like a dream—light, free, and full of life. Absolutely loved it!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 12:15 PM
Thanks, I had fun writing this one.
Manassian Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 6:01 AM
Boyishness has its charms. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
August 8, 2025 at 12:16 PM
I’ve been described as a big kid by my son and grandson.
Fleming Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 10:57 AM
You are right...age is just a number. Wish my knees would realize that. Lol. :) john
Lamoureux Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 11:39 AM
Thanks John.
Kapoor Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 10:51 PM
Very sweet lovely poem dear friend Richard. Seeing your comment on one of my old poem reminded me of the precious time when we used to exchange our views. Hope you are keeping fine dear friend. With best wishes and Subhkaamnaaen......Ravindra
Lamoureux Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 5:49 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 3:50 PM
what a delightful poem, Richard! I like the hint of childhood fantasy entwined with adulthood fancy. Perhaps we're all children at heart at this point? Outstanding! wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 6:06 PM
Thanks Sara, a great interpretation.
Gauthier Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 12:04 PM
Beautiful ~ what a deligth to read ~ love it
Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 2:47 PM
Thanks so much.
Hamilton Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Fun write Rick, nice to see you posting. I'm 65 in a couple months so I hear you. Did you see/hear my broken people song? Recently posted, hope you like it. Take care John
Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 2:47 PM
I’ll check it out.
Andresen Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 11:10 AM
- When problems shrink and one feels joy, numbers are just numbers... nothing matters ... a lovely poem, Richard :) - hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 2:48 PM
Thanks Anne Lise.
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