Joy

GIRL K I S S E S BOY Boy R A D I A T E S JOY Oct. 30, 2020 NA 'IN Just A Few Words' Contest (Form is Brevette)

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Date: 11/6/2020 5:15:00 PM

First emotion expressed by a kiss.

Date: 11/2/2020 5:31:00 PM

aww, so enamored by this, andie...sweetest congrats on your high spot...now, we just got over a storm, level 4...am ok,,, huggs

Date: 10/31/2020 3:47:00 PM

You have in a few words expressed what happens almost every time.

Date: 10/30/2020 6:40:00 PM

You even did one that rhymes, well done! You squeezed a lot of joy and romance into those six words!

Date: 10/30/2020 3:37:00 PM

Nice and upbeat, Andrea. Enjoyed this one, even though I don't know the form. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Date: 10/30/2020 1:23:00 PM

An adorable KISS, Andrea!! Good Luck in the contest!!

Date: 10/30/2020 1:23:00 PM

sweet poem Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Date: 10/30/2020 1:04:00 PM

- These were fun to write ... yours was cute, Andrea - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 10/30/2020 12:03:00 PM

Youre right Andrea, he'd feel on top of the world. Good luck Tom