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Journeys

Journeys Juicy kisses goodbye, joyful hugs say “Hi.” A jaunt for just a day or junket for far away. Jets above us fly to join friends by and by as jovial times are nigh. 3/4/17 42 syllables Pleiades

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2017 7:27:00 PM

gosh, how did I miss this one. I thought I congratulated all the J winners. This is great use of J words. By the way, I just now saw what you said to Keith about your bday same as HIllary's and your response to him. May I say that I admire you for sticking up for her. I seriously believe a lot of those things said about her were lies or exaggerations. It's so unfortunate because now we are cursed with the worst man that could ever be a president.

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/18/2017 10:39:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

John Michaels

Date: 3/12/2017 8:55:00 AM

Very nice job; like the way you've integrated a jaunty rhyme into the form. Well done on your win!

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/18/2017 10:39:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by John....

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/11/2017 9:36:00 AM

Such a joyful verse Janis, it makes me happy to congratulate you for the honor it deserves...

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/18/2017 10:40:00 PM

Thanks Charlie.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/8/2017 3:45:00 PM

You journey with fun and pleasure in mind, Janis! Love the flow of this poem. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/9/2017 12:09:00 PM

I know there are other kinds of journeys but I tried to keep it light. Thanks, Paul.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2017 11:23:00 AM

Many congrats Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/9/2017 12:09:00 PM

Thanks, Jan.

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 3/8/2017 9:10:00 AM

Lovely jingle! Congrats on top win!!

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/9/2017 12:10:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate the comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2017 2:09:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/9/2017 12:11:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/7/2017 9:06:00 PM

Well done--upbeat and descriptive. Congrats, Janis. Janice

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/9/2017 12:11:00 PM

Thanks Janice. Blessings, Janis.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/7/2017 8:29:00 PM

Lovely! Congrats!

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/7/2017 8:31:00 PM

Thanks, Kim.

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/7/2017 8:23:00 PM

Congratulations Janis!! Well done. Big Hugggs my friend! :)deb

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/7/2017 8:31:00 PM

Thank you Deb. Blessings.

Joseph May

Date: 3/7/2017 8:20:00 PM

Glad to be sharing top honors with you Janis...Congrats on your win

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/7/2017 8:32:00 PM

Thanks Joseph.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2017 7:42:00 PM

Very nice ! Congratulations on your win ~* hugs Eve

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/7/2017 8:33:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Blessings and hugs..Janis

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/7/2017 5:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Janis. I like how you worked with the rhyme.

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/7/2017 8:34:00 PM

Thanks Agnes.

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/7/2017 4:58:00 PM

Great flow that aptly describes journeys, Janis. Congrats on your top win :)

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/7/2017 8:34:00 PM

Thanks Laura. Pleased to share the podium with you.

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/7/2017 4:50:00 PM

I love how you depicted journeys of various kinds. Great smooth lines! Congrats on your 1st place win, Janis! Blessings, Kim

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/7/2017 8:36:00 PM

Thank you Kim. Now can we all use your name for K?

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/7/2017 9:05:00 AM

This is amazing, Janis:) should place high:)

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/7/2017 3:56:00 PM

We never know what delights a person and what doesn't. Thanks, Jo.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/7/2017 12:24:00 AM

That's right near excellent! Impressive, creative job ... CayCay

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/7/2017 3:56:00 PM

Thanks CayCay.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2017 4:31:00 AM

- A lovely pleiades, Janis :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/5/2017 2:13:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/4/2017 5:37:00 PM

Nice read, Janis... did you consider working your name in there somewhere? A great pleiades just as it is. Have a great day planning your next journey.

Janis Thompson
Date: 3/5/2017 2:15:00 PM

Thanks Reason. Didn't think about the name but that's a good one.