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Journey To Eternity

Even the gulls have ceased their squawking V-formations over eerie, calm seas Is it you? The ferryboat man? Making your way across waters without breeze No lapping waves, sand fine as silt Makes no sound as I leave footprints A misty morning, no shells crack ‘neath my feet The red orb rises, causes me to squint Alone with my thoughts by the River Styx I sense the passage from this world to the next My mind on heaven seems transfixed I stand and stare by quietude perplexed The ferryboat man reaches shore A wave of his hand beckons me Without a word I board his craft Before me lays the journey to eternity Serenity comes as we cross the river A world without sound surrounds me A world that I willingly choose to leave All senses drained now, as death I foresee *For Paula’s “Breathe in the Silence” Contest

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Date: 2/5/2011 12:11:00 PM
That is a very beautiful poem! you have depicted this perfectly, your words really seem to put me there and create an awesome mental image. Thank you for this I greatly enjoyed it. You are very kind on all of your comments to me I appreciate it~Virginia
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Date: 1/17/2011 5:49:00 PM
Carolyn, What anticipation in your words. I felt as if I was walking along with you. Thank you for your comment on my work and my photos... Jerri
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Date: 1/6/2011 11:09:00 AM
Many congratulations Carolyn, on your win in Paula's contest with this poetry Journey >> James
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Date: 1/6/2011 6:31:00 AM
What a journey, so scary especially going near the River Styx,, wonderful story this, so special, congrats Harry
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Date: 1/5/2011 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in the "Breathe in the silence" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2011 10:03:00 AM
Beautiful job Carolyn on your entry for "Breathe in the Silence!" Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored placed. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/4/2011 9:34:00 AM
Beautiful job Carolyn on your entry for "Breathe in the Silence!" Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored placed. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/4/2011 9:33:00 AM
Beautiful job Carolyn on your entry for "Breathe in the Silence!" Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored placed. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/4/2011 9:33:00 AM
Beautiful job Carolyn on your entry for "Breathe in the Silence!" Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored placed. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/4/2011 9:32:00 AM
Beautiful job Carolyn on your entry for "Breathe in the Silence!" Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored placed. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/4/2011 5:01:00 AM
Wow - this is an amazing poem - a wonderful take on 'passing over' - congratulations you are brill! Liz
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Date: 1/3/2011 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/3/2011 12:12:00 PM
I can see why this poem was chosen to rank among the best in the contest. You have pervasive and imaginative descriptiveness and fine rhyming in this poem. I hope everyone does not get to meet Charon the ferryman of the River Styx for many, many years from now.
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Date: 1/2/2011 8:40:00 PM
An amazing write dear Carolyn. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/2/2011 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your deserving win in Paula's "Breathe in the Silence" Contest, Carolyn! I love this angle also. Love, Audrey
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Date: 1/2/2011 8:37:00 AM
Hi and thanks for your comment on my poem "Lady With Butterfly Wings" I like this poem a lot. I write "death" poems often, but none as sweet and beautiful as this one. Mine are mostly dark and sinister. That is just me. Congrats on your win. Take care have a great 2011, Carpe Diem, Jancarl
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Date: 1/2/2011 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your well deserved win in the contest of Paula!
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Date: 1/2/2011 5:23:00 AM
beautiful!.....and the message.. the meaning are very important ....this is REAL poetry....unlike the doggerel I sometime s produce....congrats on your win..... but I feel that your poem is actually the best and should be No. 1....that is really my honest opinion....well done Carolyn.....sincerely Syd
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Date: 1/2/2011 12:41:00 AM
congrads on your win in the contest also. john
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Date: 1/1/2011 10:03:00 PM
Congrats to you~Thats really deep~I would have loved to hear your mind as you forged a white canvas~so many great parts in this piece~I Like~Bless you Carolyn~Rick
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Date: 1/1/2011 9:08:00 PM
Quite a journey you took us on, Carolyn. I wonder if most deaths are silent. Congratulations. for a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:36:00 PM
Unique piece filled with so much Carolyn.. Congratulations to you on your win, love Wilma
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:30:00 PM
Good going LNC.. I know this was written a while ago..but it can relate to the feelings therin. Congrats. BG \
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Date: 1/1/2011 1:20:00 PM
Oh such beaitiful words.You got soup mail.Teresa
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Date: 1/1/2011 8:24:00 AM
The idea that there is no reluctance to board Charon's boat is SPOOOOKY! This poem makes me shiver. It should do well in the contest. Love, Dave
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