Journey of Dreams

I 
venture
Into art,
Casting myself,
I am focused with no destination.



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For Brian's FIVE & TWENTY contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gazbowski Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:00 PM
A most excellent write.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 5:10 AM
Congratulations, Raul, on placing in Brian’s “Twenty & Five” contest. Excellent write! I particularly like the last line. I do believe that creativity lives there...focused without the limits of destination. I love it! Lovingly, Dane Ann
Culverhouse Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 7:39 PM
congrats on the BIG win!!
Joseph Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 11:56 AM
this is fabulous - I got a chill because I KNOW HOW THAT FEELS! but I could not put it into words. into my faves
Lopez Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 8:03 AM
congrats on your success it is well deserved, your are a great poet.......
Crisci Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 6:34 AM
Hi, raul. Congratulations on your first win! Your tetractys is so inspiring and thought-provoking. I wish continued success. Warm Regards, Andrew.
Zakerski Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 2:59 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on winning Brian's contest - this is an awesome poem and you definitely inspire me. Thank you for all of your kind words as well. Love, Kelly
Augustus Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 9:46 AM
That is really one of the best ways to look at life. I think when we have our minds set on exactly what we want our actions to produce, we can miss out on the pleasant surprises and opportunities God puts in our way. Congratulations on your first place win!
Foster Avatar
October 10, 2009 at 9:23 PM
Congrats Raul on a well deserved win. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
Hickman Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 9:16 PM
Congratulation on your winning poem,,definitely a cherishable piece of art and poetry wrapped together with much grace and style brialliantly,,,Blessings..Cecil
Golden Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 8:34 PM
Congratulations, Raul! You have written a brillian piece here. No suprise you won first place! Hugs, Donna
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October 9, 2009 at 12:29 PM
Raul, this is truly a derserving first place finish. CONGRATULATIONS!!!!! I really liked this the first time I read it. It has so much depth. Enjoy your honor. Karen
Brown Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Raul. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 7:26 AM
Hooray for you Raul!! This wonderful poem a winner...so well deserved ..this twist of words!! Love, Carrie
Gass Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 4:07 AM
Congratulation on your first place win, Raul! This is a beautiful glimpse into your artistic heart! Love, Robin
Culverhouse Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 4:03 AM
congrats on the BIG win!!!! I like the play on words!!
Moreno Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 2:34 AM
Wow, I'm honored! Thanks Brian...Raul
George   Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 2:26 AM
Dear Raul, Congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest. Truly a masterpiece. Love, lainie
Strand Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 12:52 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian .my latest contest 'IMAGINE' is now open.( could you soupmail me a forwarding address )
Foster Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 4:12 PM
This is a very well written tetracyts read, much continued success in your journeying my friend and Best wishes with Brian's Contest :-) ~ Always, Adell
Dvorkis Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 6:00 PM
love the last line Raul. no destination necessary, journey counts for everything:) thanks for sharing.
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 9:34 AM
Congratulations on making the hot poems list. Sara
George   Avatar
October 2, 2009 at 8:20 PM
Profound and beautiful. Good luck in Brian's contest, dear Raul. Love, Lainie
W Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 8:16 PM
sometimes it best that we adventure with out direction...................kate
Johnson Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Thank you Raul for your comments. This is a great entry for the contest. Love, Joyce
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