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Journey of Dreams

I 
venture
Into art,
Casting myself,
I am focused with no destination.



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For Brian's FIVE & TWENTY contest

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/4/2016 9:00:00 PM

A most excellent write.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/24/2009 5:10:00 AM

Congratulations, Raul, on placing in Brian’s “Twenty & Five” contest. Excellent write! I particularly like the last line. I do believe that creativity lives there...focused without the limits of destination. I love it! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/16/2009 7:39:00 PM

congrats on the BIG win!!

Veronica Joseph

Date: 10/14/2009 11:56:00 AM

this is fabulous - I got a chill because I KNOW HOW THAT FEELS! but I could not put it into words. into my faves

Abe Lopez

Date: 10/13/2009 8:03:00 AM

congrats on your success it is well deserved, your are a great poet.......

Andrew Crisci

Date: 10/13/2009 6:34:00 AM

Hi, raul. Congratulations on your first win! Your tetractys is so inspiring and thought-provoking. I wish continued success. Warm Regards, Andrew.

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 10/12/2009 2:59:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS on winning Brian's contest - this is an awesome poem and you definitely inspire me. Thank you for all of your kind words as well. Love, Kelly

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/11/2009 9:46:00 AM

That is really one of the best ways to look at life. I think when we have our minds set on exactly what we want our actions to produce, we can miss out on the pleasant surprises and opportunities God puts in our way. Congratulations on your first place win!

Adell Foster

Date: 10/10/2009 9:23:00 PM

Congrats Raul on a well deserved win. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Cecil Hickman

Date: 10/9/2009 9:16:00 PM

Congratulation on your winning poem,,definitely a cherishable piece of art and poetry wrapped together with much grace and style brialliantly,,,Blessings..Cecil

Donna Golden

Date: 10/9/2009 8:34:00 PM

Congratulations, Raul! You have written a brillian piece here. No suprise you won first place! Hugs, Donna

Date: 10/9/2009 12:29:00 PM

Raul, this is truly a derserving first place finish. CONGRATULATIONS!!!!! I really liked this the first time I read it. It has so much depth. Enjoy your honor. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2009 7:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place win Raul. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/9/2009 7:26:00 AM

Hooray for you Raul!! This wonderful poem a winner...so well deserved ..this twist of words!! Love, Carrie

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/9/2009 4:07:00 AM

Congratulation on your first place win, Raul! This is a beautiful glimpse into your artistic heart! Love, Robin

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/9/2009 4:03:00 AM

congrats on the BIG win!!!! I like the play on words!!

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/9/2009 2:34:00 AM

Wow, I'm honored! Thanks Brian...Raul

Elaine George

Date: 10/9/2009 2:26:00 AM

Dear Raul, Congratulations on your first place win in Brian's contest. Truly a masterpiece. Love, lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 10/9/2009 12:52:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian .my latest contest 'IMAGINE' is now open.( could you soupmail me a forwarding address )

Adell Foster

Date: 10/7/2009 4:12:00 PM

This is a very well written tetracyts read, much continued success in your journeying my friend and Best wishes with Brian's Contest :-) ~ Always, Adell

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 10/4/2009 6:00:00 PM

love the last line Raul. no destination necessary, journey counts for everything:) thanks for sharing.