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""goodbye" is a contraction of "God be with you.""


earth proud livery doves begin to coalesce heaven unbinds rain 8/5/2021

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Date: 8/12/2021 9:04:00 AM
Lovely, Eve ~ congrats
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Date: 8/12/2021 7:36:00 AM
I like this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 8/7/2021 5:49:00 PM
Eve, The journey of a lifetime ending in a flight of dove's goodbyes. Very nice. -Richard
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Date: 8/7/2021 5:30:00 PM
I did not know this about goodbye, but now I will always remember it, so I thank you for that Eve as well as this beautiful poem.
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Date: 8/7/2021 11:19:00 AM
what a wonderful haiku this is, Eve. Congrats and thanks for sharing.
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Date: 8/7/2021 8:57:00 AM
Gentle as the cooing of doves and soft raindrops - each a gift sent from Heaven! So lovely and serent Eve. We have mourning doves and I love their cooing as I wake up each day. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/7/2021 6:49:00 AM
Lovely. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/5/2021 9:05:00 AM
Considering how doves dirty my pavement, the rain is welcome and hopefully will clean all. Lovely haiku,
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Date: 8/5/2021 9:18:00 AM
I have the same issue here, have to watch where you sit on patio chairs.