Journey

earth proud livery
doves begin to coalesce
heaven unbinds rain


8/5/2021

birdnaturehaiku

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Line Gauthier

August 12, 2021 at 9:04 AM

Lovely, Eve ~ congrats

Sara Kendrick

August 12, 2021 at 7:36 AM

I like this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Quoth Theraven

August 7, 2021 at 5:49 PM

Eve, The journey of a lifetime ending in a flight of dove's goodbyes. Very nice. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger

August 7, 2021 at 5:30 PM

I did not know this about goodbye, but now I will always remember it, so I thank you for that Eve as well as this beautiful poem.

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2021 at 11:19 AM

what a wonderful haiku this is, Eve. Congrats and thanks for sharing.

Sam Kauffman

August 7, 2021 at 8:57 AM

Gentle as the cooing of doves and soft raindrops - each a gift sent from Heaven! So lovely and serent Eve. We have mourning doves and I love their cooing as I wake up each day. Congratulations on your win!