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Our outside road may have a billion steps, but the inward journey has just one: this step. By poet.
The geese fly back to the light over the mountain. Starlit fettle with rapt stars, laced in velvety delight. All must be engraved in that pure crystal fountain. Zest is a journey, scary, and never given by might. A wondrous realm of rough dreams, laden with vigor. It never vows to be flawless or to lack its sole rigor. You might spot your line: life—fully pulls her trigger. Losing heat by flying on a hazy drift over the seawall. Vicious swirls saw dots, and lush hope let ashes fall. It propels and impresses us until we start to crawl. Drop aging bones in an endless, deep pull at a curtain. No one is flawless or ethical, yet all have a sole sight. All people have imperfections, giving them a fine figure. Bask your journey; the earth will glitter and lighten us all. Written: March 04, 2023 Writing Challenge - ''J'' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France This poem form is the Fragmented Rhyme invented and Conceived by Constance La France. It has 14 lines with indentation, and a rhyme scheme, as follows: ABABCCCDDDABCD

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Date: 4/3/2023 3:57:00 PM
Sotto, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/11/2023 2:34:00 AM
Congratulations Sotto on your win with this beautiful Fragmented Rhyme, it comes as no surprise your poem simply divine. Belle
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Date: 3/9/2023 6:33:00 PM
Back to your great poem with Congratulations on your first place win.... dear Friend.
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Date: 3/9/2023 1:14:00 PM
Very, very nice Lasaad and in Constance's fine form. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/9/2023 10:05:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Las ... well deserved :) - hugs
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Date: 3/8/2023 11:22:00 AM
Beautiful expression!!
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Date: 3/5/2023 6:36:00 AM
Creative lines penned for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 3/5/2023 3:43:00 AM
- A wonderful journey with your words, Las - A great saying at the top - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/5/2023 2:58:00 AM
I am always awed by your ingenuity as a poet ! You bring in a lot of variety and novelty to your poems, never sticking to the conventional, outdated modes of expression. Great penning my friend
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Date: 3/4/2023 7:50:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Lasaad! I especially love the last two lines!! Debx
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