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Journey

Begins from the unknown caves, Waxing and waning till graves; Progresses journey; squints, slants, Through rough rocks and softest sands...! In its silent secrets, sweet, Trifles turn tough; targets treat; Trackless trails merrily merge, Rivers and rivulets surge...! Dearly deemed destinations, Ease endless explorations; To pilgrims of perfection, Peace propels pure protection...! I'll stay patiently trusting, Each step to God entrusting; I'll, my journey, enjoy whole, Gaining solace to my soul...! 21 March 2022 Form J - Just Write Me a New Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/26/2022 6:56:00 PM
Christuraj, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful ~Constance
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Date: 3/25/2022 11:30:00 AM
Great use of alliteration in your journey, I like 'through rock rocks and softest sands' - congrats on your win~
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Date: 3/25/2022 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Journey" is a lovely story/write. Love This One. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.......................
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Date: 3/25/2022 6:06:00 AM
Peace propels pure protection...! Great metaphors, Alex, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/22/2022 6:02:00 AM
really enjoyed your poem, Christuraj! You are so good in experimenting with different poetic forms. Loved every stanza, especially "Progresses journey; squints, slants, Through rough rocks and softest sands...!" BW ~ Mala
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/24/2022 10:00:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 3/21/2022 7:24:00 AM
Your last stanza is a beautiful icing on the cake, Chris ! Really enjoyed your poem !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/21/2022 7:59:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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