Journey

Begins from the unknown caves,
Waxing and waning till graves;
Progresses journey; squints, slants, 
Through rough rocks and softest sands...!

In its silent secrets, sweet,
Trifles turn tough; targets treat;  
Trackless trails merrily merge, 
Rivers and rivulets surge...!

Dearly deemed destinations,
Ease endless explorations;
To pilgrims of perfection,
Peace propels pure protection...!

I'll stay patiently trusting,
Each step to God entrusting;
I'll, my journey, enjoy whole,
Gaining solace to my soul...!


21 March 2022
Form J - Just Write Me a New Poem Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
March 26, 2022 at 6:56 PM
Christuraj, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful ~Constance
Faulkner Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 11:30 AM
Great use of alliteration in your journey, I like 'through rock rocks and softest sands' - congrats on your win~
Goldsmith Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Journey" is a lovely story/write. Love This One. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.......................
Poet Avatar
March 25, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Peace propels pure protection...! Great metaphors, Alex, Congratulations on your win.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 22, 2022 at 6:02 AM
really enjoyed your poem, Christuraj! You are so good in experimenting with different poetic forms. Loved every stanza, especially "Progresses journey; squints, slants, Through rough rocks and softest sands...!" BW ~ Mala
Alex Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 10:00 PM
Thank you very much.
George Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 7:24 AM
Your last stanza is a beautiful icing on the cake, Chris ! Really enjoyed your poem !
Alex Avatar
March 21, 2022 at 7:59 AM
Thank you very much.
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