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Born dead put in a bucket, Bellowed and got himself saw, Tetanus at 10, bloody bad luck Pus filled veins had for sure, Doctor’s would take his leg off. father said “no good , no more, one legged horseman, is useless, might as well be dead for sure,” snatched from the Mungindi hospital, went to a herbalist, Chinese lady’s door, she medicated, doctored the cripple, back on two legs now for sure. Doctor’s teeth gnashed,they knew it all, Said "he will die of Tetanus poor boy," Alternative medicine was on the ball, They had to eat their words, some call, The bitterest taste of the gall.
Nancy Jones Contest Name A Toothful Ode

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Date: 9/21/2011 1:41:00 PM
Congratulations in the contest of Nancy Jones "A Toothful Ode" Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/18/2011 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy,Don
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Date: 9/18/2011 3:56:00 AM
Don congrats on your teriffic win mate, ..David
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in the Toothful Ode contest sponsored by Nancy Jones. CR
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Date: 9/17/2011 10:14:00 PM
Sounds like he had nine lives. I wonder if the herbs were relaxants. well written Don...cheers Marg.
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Don Johnson
Date: 9/17/2011 10:31:00 PM
1927 could have been a death sentence in the backwoods of Australia, But not to be. In Syria in 1941 a cruiser gun shell landed between Don and his mate and never went off, both put a foot on it and said "can't kill us"
Date: 9/17/2011 5:32:00 PM
Congratulations Don on your high rating ode. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:50:00 PM
yeah Don..just chock full of great stories so glad to see you win big..light & love
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:45:00 PM
Your style's a constant delight to me, Don Johnson, whether the matter be serious or light. Thanks so much for the write and for supporting my contest. Preesh ya muchly. namaste~N
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Date: 8/19/2011 4:08:00 PM
Nice poem - good luck in the contest. I have to strat writing again soon. Mike
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Date: 8/17/2011 5:36:00 PM
I have to say you have creatively, masterfully, and dynamically made a spectacular poem! You can create some of the greatest! I hope you do well in the contest!!
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Date: 8/17/2011 8:29:00 AM
Reads like a winning number to me..I could have fixed him up with some Meadow Rue and FeverFew...Thanks for the continued support of my work..Sara
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Don Johnson
Date: 8/17/2011 6:45:00 PM
it was back in 1927, then you died an went to heaven, infection killed you in those days, in the back woods no chance hey:) we got penicillin after ww2...xo, Don
Date: 8/17/2011 5:57:00 AM
a wreckingly beautiful write, don! wow..:) huggs, nette
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