John's Aramis

Intoxicating was his scent Many hard-earned dollars were spent To evoke his bliss Give him Aramis Young and poor, we were newleyweds Memories linger in my head This scent was so strong But to him it belonged And through time I travel today When e’er Aramis wafts my way Sad tears gently rise John’s scent fills my eyes Another dimension I seek Longing to hear my husband speak We'll meet again one day Faith brings hope my way
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Horne Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Aww, how lovely that the aftershave can bring back such lovely memories for you. It's probably a daft idea, but have you ever thought of buying some and putting a few drops on, say, your pillowcase to comfort you when you feel down? I rarely get round to reading blogs - although I looked out for yours. I'm glad I wasn't the only one to enter a poem that was too short (and thanks for the compliment x) I smiled at James' Semaj - Kcaj wouldn't look as cool, would it? LOL
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December 4, 2010 at 5:29 PM
gosh, carolyn, I am going in circles looking for a poem of yours I have never read. Gosh, I am gonna just stay here and say, though I saw it before,it's one of those to enjoy again and again! Luv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 6:58 PM
This is lovely remembrance, CArolyn. He must have been wonderful. Luv, Andrea
Neels Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 12:43 PM
This brought tears to my eyes too Carolyn.. He must have been an amazing man, love this write..*hugs* love Wilma
Brumley Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 7:18 PM
So sorry for your loss Carolyn. I firmly believe, because God has proven it over and over, that everything happens for a reason, and for the betterment of those that have the courage and faith to acknowledge that, and then to expect and look for the wonderful blessing that will rise from the ashes of adversity.
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May 30, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Carolyn, This is really scary my wfe bought ARAMIS for me when we got married 3/69. It is her favorite for all the same reasons and of course the name is John. By the way you are on the bubble for a Narrative. All the best, JT
Mcgovern Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 1:21 PM
I believe I will have to buy some Aramis. Though I have never used the product, your beautifully written muse does make it inticing. The second stanza is magnificent. Mac
Guzzi Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 1:04 PM
a dear verse for a dear heart from a dear heart. Light & Love
Moreno Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 3:04 AM
Carolyn, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
Gorelick Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Hi LNC..congrats on your poem..hope all is well and that you are settled in. miss you. Again..glad this poem about John was featured. BG
Gass Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations on this very touching and beautifully written piece being featured this week, Carolyn! Love, Robin
Austin Avatar
October 6, 2009 at 8:21 AM
Hi, Carolyn. Congrats on this selection. Hope your problems are being resolved. Love, daver
Freeman Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 5:02 PM
This is some kind of a write Carolyn, chuckle, chuckle, Of his loud, he wasn't Proud! smile. What a beast, what a beast. So congratulations on this feature poem, Sincerely, Love Moses
Kendrick Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 4:31 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Nicely done piece. Keep writing. Sara
Fraser Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 11:18 AM
Congratulations on your feature poem this week Carolyn. Aramis was one of my favs when i was younger, now it's Kouros >> James
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October 5, 2009 at 9:54 AM
Carolyn,..I remember this great poem,....I'm happy to see it made a feature !!! Congratulations my friend !
Richards Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 7:49 AM
Such a deep sadness in this touching poem!~ Well deserving this featured place this week. Love, Carrie
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 3:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Carolyn. Love, Carol
Goff Avatar
October 5, 2009 at 3:15 AM
great feature! Carolyn!...can very much feel this poem... jim
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October 4, 2009 at 11:27 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Carolyn.Rgds Brian
Rider Avatar
October 4, 2009 at 10:22 PM
awww so sad,It is amazing how certain scents and smells can your head with unwanted memories, like the snatch of a whistled tune! Great poem Carolyn..~Trudy~
Iloduba Jnr Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 3:17 PM
should`nt we all be wearing Aramis? How so well you paint!cheers!
Pate Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 11:33 AM
Isn't it amazing how smells can trigger memories. This poem flowed with love, sadness and recollection of a good time in your life. Nicely written.
King Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 6:48 AM
A beautiful Poem, Carolyn! it is often a scent that triggers the most powerful memories. Glad you like "Pinholes". I wrote it some years ago, after our Pastor told us the story of how a little girl saw the stars as pinholes in God's blanket. He had just returned from a year's sabbatical in the US, so it looks as if the idea has now done a round-trip!
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June 19, 2009 at 10:48 PM
Dear Carolyn, Extremely Heartfelt A beautiful Tribute to YOUR Husband I can feel this artistic POEM in my Heart I have Tears in my eyes YOU are a Beautiful PURE POETESS LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG
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