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John's Aramis

Intoxicating was his scent Many hard-earned dollars were spent To evoke his bliss Give him Aramis Young and poor, we were newleyweds Memories linger in my head This scent was so strong But to him it belonged And through time I travel today When e’er Aramis wafts my way Sad tears gently rise John’s scent fills my eyes Another dimension I seek Longing to hear my husband speak We'll meet again one day Faith brings hope my way

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/5/2011 12:37:00 PM

Aww, how lovely that the aftershave can bring back such lovely memories for you. It's probably a daft idea, but have you ever thought of buying some and putting a few drops on, say, your pillowcase to comfort you when you feel down? I rarely get round to reading blogs - although I looked out for yours. I'm glad I wasn't the only one to enter a poem that was too short (and thanks for the compliment x) I smiled at James' Semaj - Kcaj wouldn't look as cool, would it? LOL

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2010 5:29:00 PM

gosh, carolyn, I am going in circles looking for a poem of yours I have never read. Gosh, I am gonna just stay here and say, though I saw it before,it's one of those to enjoy again and again! Luv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/30/2010 6:58:00 PM

This is lovely remembrance, CArolyn. He must have been wonderful. Luv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/10/2010 12:43:00 PM

This brought tears to my eyes too Carolyn.. He must have been an amazing man, love this write..*hugs* love Wilma

Timothy Brumley

Date: 7/30/2010 7:18:00 PM

So sorry for your loss Carolyn. I firmly believe, because God has proven it over and over, that everything happens for a reason, and for the betterment of those that have the courage and faith to acknowledge that, and then to expect and look for the wonderful blessing that will rise from the ashes of adversity.

John Trusty

Date: 5/30/2010 12:19:00 PM

Carolyn, This is really scary my wfe bought ARAMIS for me when we got married 3/69. It is her favorite for all the same reasons and of course the name is John. By the way you are on the bubble for a Narrative. All the best, JT

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 1/25/2010 1:21:00 PM

I believe I will have to buy some Aramis. Though I have never used the product, your beautifully written muse does make it inticing. The second stanza is magnificent. Mac

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/8/2009 1:04:00 PM

a dear verse for a dear heart from a dear heart. Light & Love

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/9/2009 3:04:00 AM

Carolyn, congrats on being featured this week...Raul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/7/2009 3:28:00 PM

Hi LNC..congrats on your poem..hope all is well and that you are settled in. miss you. Again..glad this poem about John was featured. BG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/6/2009 1:20:00 PM

Congratulations on this very touching and beautifully written piece being featured this week, Carolyn! Love, Robin

Daver Austin

Date: 10/6/2009 8:21:00 AM

Hi, Carolyn. Congrats on this selection. Hope your problems are being resolved. Love, daver

John Freeman

Date: 10/5/2009 5:02:00 PM

This is some kind of a write Carolyn, chuckle, chuckle, Of his loud, he wasn't Proud! smile. What a beast, what a beast. So congratulations on this feature poem, Sincerely, Love Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2009 4:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Nicely done piece. Keep writing. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 10/5/2009 11:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your feature poem this week Carolyn. Aramis was one of my favs when i was younger, now it's Kouros >> James

James Peranteau

Date: 10/5/2009 9:54:00 AM

Carolyn,..I remember this great poem,....I'm happy to see it made a feature !!! Congratulations my friend !

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/5/2009 7:49:00 AM

Such a deep sadness in this touching poem!~ Well deserving this featured place this week. Love, Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2009 3:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Carolyn. Love, Carol

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/5/2009 3:15:00 AM

great feature! Carolyn!...can very much feel this poem... jim

Brian Strand

Date: 10/4/2009 11:27:00 PM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Carolyn.Rgds Brian

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/4/2009 10:22:00 PM

awww so sad,It is amazing how certain scents and smells can your head with unwanted memories, like the snatch of a whistled tune! Great poem Carolyn..~Trudy~

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 9/2/2009 3:17:00 PM

should`nt we all be wearing Aramis? How so well you paint!cheers!

Lena Pate

Date: 7/25/2009 11:33:00 AM

Isn't it amazing how smells can trigger memories. This poem flowed with love, sadness and recollection of a good time in your life. Nicely written.

Frances King

Date: 7/23/2009 6:48:00 AM

A beautiful Poem, Carolyn! it is often a scent that triggers the most powerful memories. Glad you like "Pinholes". I wrote it some years ago, after our Pastor told us the story of how a little girl saw the stars as pinholes in God's blanket. He had just returned from a year's sabbatical in the US, so it looks as if the idea has now done a round-trip!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 6/19/2009 10:48:00 PM

Dear Carolyn, Extremely Heartfelt A beautiful Tribute to YOUR Husband I can feel this artistic POEM in my Heart I have Tears in my eyes YOU are a Beautiful PURE POETESS LOVE YOU ALWAYS...HG