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John Locked Into a Red Car

Poor old John, I'll go after the red car said John, Poor John, Poor silly old John, Didn't he know he was locking himself into, What turned out to be his famous last words, As after the red car went by, A blue one came out of a side street, And that was the end of poor silly old John. If poor silly old John and others who met similar fates, Had not locked themselves in, And kept fate out of the equation, Opting instead to go when the way was clear, How long in the tooth could they have become.

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Date: 5/13/2019 1:50:00 PM
Poor silly old John - as you said (together with others) that meet the same fate as silly old John, would all be older in the tooth - a silly silly mistake old John made! Hey David i found two boxes of stamps, first day issue and real oldies going back to the early beginning of the 20th century when my grandfather was also saving stamps which he sent me and now hope with all my heart hope you will enjoy them. Just have to pack them so they don't get damaged. Will be in touch. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/13/2019 9:27:00 PM
Thank you seems so inadequate. Really honoured. best regards David. PS this poem came about because I feel we can lock ourselves into a particular course of action that it can be too late to deviate from like an overriding programme. Anyway food for thought.

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